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Deep in the ocean of blue,
Searching for a clue,
Among the coral reef,
Of my dreams beyond belief.
I swim slowly—
Unrealistically, unbelievably slowly.
The fish swim by me,
I see a colorful one and I smile with glee.
Deeper and deeper I go,
The fish swim by, “just go with the flow!”
Now I see the ocean floor,
I decide to go explore.
Something gleams before me,
I reach my hand out and pull something free.
It was the key that I lost,
Sparkling with gloss.
I carried my treasure,
So close to the surface that you could measure.
Suddenly, my dream melts away,
And I awake to the new morning day.
- Title: Ocean Dreams
- Artist: auDi_11
- Description: Just a little 5th Grade assignment....xD
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: ocean dream
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Lemon_PopRocks - 04/21/2009
- that is soo cool I'm only a littel older than you and... WOW!
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 10/25/2008
- Well, that is some good writing for elementary work.
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