Granpa

• Artist: xXxXxbabexXxXx
• Description: This is one poem that I wrote right after my Grandfather passed away. He died of heart failure. He was the one person I could go to, the one being who understood me completely. I was nine when he died, at his funeral I gave him this poem. And forever he shall know, he is loved...
  
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• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: deathlovegrandfather

Granpa, when you died...
I cried for you...
Granpa, when you left me all alone in this world....
I looked up to the stars hoping to see you one last time...
Granpa, when you left me behind...
I....
Granpa, when you died...
You took a part of me...
Granpa you are forever gone...
through my eyes I may not see you....
But with my heart....I am with you...

Comments

[Atheshya]

There's nothing here, really. It's very bland and badly written. One star. (no, I will not give pity stars - yes, death is sad, but that doesn't change the quality of your poem)

[Teh Juicebox Fairy]

When I read your description, I have no idea why, but I started tearing...Better yet, bawling!

[Kyon Yokutoshi]

i can relate i mean my grandpa died but i never told him i loved him and the next day i went to say it and he died rite befor i could get it out.....

[Peppermint Elf]

Wow.... that's so bittersweet. I'm sure he would've liked it.