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Hello? Hello? Is anybody there?
Is there anybody who will help me?
Help! Help! I need you!
Why? Why won’t you answer me?
Did I do something wrong?
Help! Help! Answer me! Please!
I’m shattering… breaking…
- by Nami Kiasu |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/07/2009 |
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- Title: a call for help
- Artist: Nami Kiasu
- Description: yah... you no what, i don't know why i did this. but really, do i have to have a reason? anywayz... please comment and rate! dont be mean, i already know im the worst poet ever... lol
- Date: 05/07/2009
- Tags: call help namikiasu random
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Comments (7 Comments)
- hfytdgtgsjh9ba - 06/12/2009
- its wonderful i really liked it and by the way if seen worst poetry
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- Silencematters - 06/04/2009
- i love it it was wonderful and i can understand it
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- missbillkaulitz10 - 06/04/2009
- i loved it your really good keep going and youl get better and better
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- Nami Kiasu - 05/29/2009
- wow! thank you everyone for the advice and comments! ^_^ zyat, your right, it was brief, but its not meaninless and terrible! sad thank you everybody!
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- Robert_Raymond - 05/28/2009
- lol it's not bad. 4/5
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- discreetlyforgetting - 05/26/2009
- I thought it was terrible. The words are meaningless and it emphasizes its briefness.
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- 6Mr-Bright-Side9 - 05/22/2009
- this kinda seems like a random poem, lol. then again....lot's of people just come up with poems as they're writing. i like it though. keep it up, and you could be famous! 5/5
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