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i read it out loud and for a moment nothing happened, thats untill the floor began shaking,the floor in the center of the room dropped away into oblivion. Blue(a blue crystal given to her as a gift) began to glow and pulse furiosly, then there was a slight glow in the center of the hole, it got brighter and brighter and bigger and bigger untill it sat there floating in mid air. It was a big huge purple gem, and by huge i mean 11 feet tall.and inside of it was the one thing i never thought i wouls ever see in 1000 life times, The Grifiths Edge....Devon said to me"the chosen one must step across the oblivion...Anny...if your not the ne then..." i didnt want to know. I thought to myself "i better get a snickerdoodle after this..."i got a running start to just but i couldnt make myself jump, again i tryed, but just couldnt! ok ok...ill just step to the edge and step off, my heart began leaping into my hear as i stepped to the edge of oblivion, and stepped off. i held my breath, i couldnt hear the wind rushing by my ears, i opened one eye, two eyes, im floating...what the?.... i took a careful step, the bolted to the gem, i wiped the sweat from my brow, and looked at the gem. How do i get it out? i kicked it, i poked it, i even yelled "Open sesemi!!!" but nothing happened. i thought the words from he book over in my head, let the great blue be your key....Blue! i found a hole in the gem and inserted blue, nothing happened i poked it. WOW THERE!!! it like freaking jello!!! i reached inside, dang i cant reach, oh god....i poked my head in, grabbed the blade and was OUT. note to self, NEVER DO THAT AGAIN. if i havent told you im extremely clausterphobic, that was like....i dont know it was scary.
~Ok thats it for now, let me know how yo like it, i still have some things to tweek, and its still unfinished and unpublished, i also need th publics opinions just so i know what YOU want to read, thank you if you did read this and sorry for he word wall, deal with it.
- by Robotic Purple |
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- | Submitted on 06/14/2010 |
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- Title: Peice of my story (Questions)
- Artist: Robotic Purple
- Description: this is a small peice of my story called Questions, its about a 14 year old girl named annarose velicity faller, she has discovered that she is no normal teen, she is the one chosen to slay the Dark Queen with the Grifiths Edge, this is the part were she finds it and escapes the castle of the queen this is close to the end of this first book.
- Date: 06/14/2010
- Tags: pieceofstory questions
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