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*We see an old farm in 1971. Dust blows with the wind and tumbleweeds tumble along the ground.*
*Pots and old jewlery are hung on the branches of trees with string.*
*The whether is 110 degrees. The sun is out and the wind barley blows. Its musty and very hot out.*
*We suddenly see a corpse on the fence near the farm area.*
*It's a man, skinned and sitting on the fence. We see its rotten teeth and flesh. It looks about a year old.*
*He's dressed up in a tuxedo and black pants as the camera slowly zooms out.*
*We then see his wife, also skinned alive sitting next to him with her head against his shoulder.*
*They are holding hands. The wife's flesh and teeth are rotting as well. The camera zooms out more and we see maggots and other insects living in thier legs.*
*We see a centipede crawl out of the man's mouth.*
*We see maggots falling and crawling everywhere.*
*A tumbleweed gets caught in thier feet.*
*The camera zooms out more and black out.*
THE TEXAS CHAINSAW MASSACRE
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*August 17th, 1974.*
*We see a van driving across the highway. It's 104 degrees outisde in Houston, Texas.*
*It's a nice summer day. There are barley cars on the road.*
*Inside the van, a guy named Ryan is driving the van. In the passenger seat is his friend, Holly.*
Ryan: I don't remember this ride being so long.
Holly: I told you they moved a bit more into the state. They were in El Paso last time.
*Holly's sister, JoAnna is in the back. JoAnna's, Holly's and Ryan's friends, Vince, Tiffany, Luis and Karine are with them as well.*
JoAnna: No, I think they lived somewhere in...Dallas. Wasn't it Dallas?
Holly: No, that was Uncle Carl who lived there!
JoAnna: Hell, I don't know. It's been awhile.
*Karine is sitting on Vince's lap.*
*Tiffany looks over at them.*
Tiffany: I'm starting to wonder if bringing you two was a good idea.
*Vince chuckles.*
Vince: Hell yeah it was!
Karine: Dont worry, we wont have out fun until everyon'e sleeping, ok?
*Everyone laughs a little.*
Holly: I don't know, dont you think it will be weird seeing them. I mean it's been two years.
Luis: Hey, if they invited you then it should be ok, am I right?
Holly: I'm not sure...
JoAnna: We'll be ok, Holly. Just don't sweat it.
Ryan: So what are we gonna do there again?
*Holly looks at JoAnna and everyone else and they laugh.*
Ryan: What's funny??
Tiffany: Well she only said it like, 5 times!
Ryan: Well i forgot! Care to tell me?
Luis: We're just going to barbaque there.
Ryan: We didn't even bring any food.
Holly: Dont worry, my grandparents said they have everything.
Luis: Makes it easier for us I guess.
*JoAnna rolls down the window.*
JoAnna: Goddd, it's so hot! Does the AC in here work?
Vince: Nope. Because Ryan loves to get cheap vans.
*JoAnna sighs and takes a large chug of her water bottle.*
*After a few moments Ryan sees someone at the side of the road, putting his thumb up.*
Holly: Who is that?
Ryan:...Hitchhiker.
Vince: Ohh no, let's just keep on going.
Karine: We can't just leave him out there!
Holly: Stop the van, Ryan..
*Ryan stops the van.*
*After a few minutes, the hitchiker is in the van. JoAnna has her back against the passanger seat. Karine and Vincet are sitting in the middle.*
*Luis and Tiffany are sitting next to eachother on one end of the van.*
*There's a long pause.*
JoAnna: So, what's your name, mister?
*No reply.*
*Pause.*
*Ryan tries putting on the fan but it doesn't work.*
*Ryan coughs a little.*
*Another pause.*
Vince: Soo...where were you headed?
Hitchiker: Oh--I was headin home! From that-meat packing district up the road.
Tiffany: Do you live around here?
*He doesn't reply.*
*Very long pause.*
Luis: Oh, so you work in one of them places?
*The Hitchiker nods.*
Luis: So tell me, what do they do with the cows again? I mean, I hear they just have this machine, where it goes straight into the cow's head and it pulls out their skull!
Karine: My God..
Vince: Do we really have to--
Hitchiker: OH! They dont do it like that anymore! What they do is--they take the head...from the cow. And the just chop off its ears and nose and tongue! Just like in 3 seconds!
*He does a gesture.*
Luis: I thought so.
Vince: So how's it like working there?
Hitchiker: Oh--it's fun. I enjoy cutting them off...one by one...
*Long pause.*
*The radio plays a song.*
*JoAnna whispers something to Holly.*
Hitchiker: But..you know, I always take the eyes and tongue to take home.
*Pause.*
Tiffany: You mean...you eat them?
Hitchiker: My whole family eats them! You should come over for dinner sometime! They make it real good! You'll like it!
Vince: Oh, I don't know. We're kind of in a hurry...
*The Hitchiker suddenly frowns.*
*Long pause. Everyone but Ryan is looking at the Hitchiker, not knowing what to say.*
*Holly rolls down her window.*
*Tiffany adjusts herself.*
Karine: This is so weird..
*Another pause.*
*The Hitchiker takes out a camera. He then takes a photo of Luis. The photo comes out the camera and Luis takes it.*
*Pause.*
Luis: It didn't come out very well.
*The Hitchiker then takes that as an insult.*
*The then takes out his razor, which makes them jump a little.*
*The Hitchiker starts to chuckle and he begins to slice his own hand.*
JoAnna: oh my God..!
Vince: What the--
*The Hitchiker slices harder as the blood and slides along his hand. THe Hitchiker laughs.*
Luis: Jesus...
Karine: What are you doing to yourself..??
*The Hitchiker then stops and looks at everyone, laughing and tearing at the same time.*
*Everyone stares at him, horrified.*
*The Hitchiker looks at Vince.*
Hitchiker: You want this razor? It's a good razor!!
Vince: No-no I don't want it...keep it...
*The Hitchiker then looks down.*
*Pause.*
*Suddenly the Hitchiker grabs Luis' photo, lights a match and burns it. He tosses it on the floor.*
*Everyone begins to panic.*
Vince: Ryan stop the van!
JoAnna: Stop the van!!
*Karine and Tiffany scream. Ryan stops the van. The Hitchiker grabs Luis' arm and slices it. Luis yells in pain. Vincent opens the van door.*
Ryan: Get him out of here!!
*Vincet them throws him out and closes the door. Ryan drives off as the Hitchiker kicks the van smears blood on it.*
*They drive away.*
*Tiffany throws the photo quickly out the window.*
*Luis grunts in pain as JoAnna crawls over to him to help him.*
Holly: Jesus, what was that guy's problem?
*Karine shakes her head.*
Ryan: I swear, that's the last goddamn Hitchiker we're picking up...
Vince: Just crazy. No more strangers...
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TO BE CONTINUED! biggrin
- by XCherrehCokeX3 |
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- Title: TexasChainsawMassacre(remake!)
- Artist: XCherrehCokeX3
- Description: Here's my remake of the texas chainsaw massacre! Lol i wrote it a few years back! Here's part one! ENJOY!
- Date: 05/09/2010
- Tags: texaschainsawmassacreremake
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- death_is_unknown - 05/11/2010
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you made a few mistakes like
The then takes out his razor, it sould be like
Then he takes out his razor, . . . other than that its perfest same gose 4 Pt2 5 stars - Report As Spam
- xXIcecream_PieXx - 05/10/2010
- luv it! ;D
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