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One Day There Was A Boy&Girl Walking Home From The Park In SummerTime
Jack--Hey Do Yu Wanna Come Over For A Little Bit My Mom Will Cook Us Something To Eat
Jessica--Yeahh Let Me Call My Mom To See If I Can (Calls Mom Talks For A Minute Then Hangs Up)
Jack--What Did She Say?
Jessica--Yeahh I Can She Said Yes
Jack--(Smiles) Lets Go (Holds Her Hand)
Jessica--(Smiles)
(They Walk To His House And When They Get There His Big Brother Is The Only One Home)
Jack--Where's Mom
Jasson--She Left Who's Your Friend?
Jack--Ohh This Is Jessica We Meet At School A Month Ago She Was Comeing Over Dinner
Jasson--Yu Know How To Cook Why Dont Yu
Jack--Ok I'll Cook
Jasson--Come Here Jessica We Can Listin To Music In My Room While He's Cooking
Jessica--Uhh...Ok?
(Jasson Takes Her To His Room They Sit On The Bed And He Turns On Some Music)
Jasson--So How Old Are Yu?
Jessica--Im 14 How Old Are Yu?
Jasson--Im 16
Jessica--Cool
Jasson--Your Very Cute For A 14Year Old
Jessica--(blushes) Thanks
Jasson--AnyTime So Do Yu Got A BoyFriend
Jessica--No I Dont Why?
Jasson--Well I Was Gonna See If Yu Would Like To Go On A Date With Me?
Jessica--I Would Love To But I Kinda Like Your Brother
Jasson--Ohh I See He's More Your Age AnyWay
Jessica--Yeahh
Jack--(Calls Out) Dinners Ready
Jessica--That Was Fast
Jack--Its Just Mac&Chease (Laughs)
Jessica--My Favort
(They All Sit Down And Eat)
Jack--Hey We Should All Go Spend The Night At Red Hill To Night
Jessica--That Sounds Fun My Mom Wouldent Care
Jasson--I'll Drive Us There
Jack--Lets Go Get The Stuff
(They Pack Up And Leave They Arive At Red Hill)
(They Put Up A Tent)
Jessica--Lets Go Walk
Jack--Sure(Smiles)
Jasson--I'll Stay Here In Case Any Animals Show Up
Jessica&Jack--Ok
(Jessica And Jack Take Of Walking And Holding Hands Jasson Stays Behide)
Jasson--(Starts To Hear A Nosie Of Someone Walking Around Him) Whos There Is That Yall?
(No Reply)
(Noise Contiue)
Jasson--Who The F*ck Is Is Here
(He Looks Behide Him And See's A Person Its To Dark To See The Face)
Jasson--Jack Is That Yu
(The Person Laughs And Says No And Stabs Jasson In The Back Covers His Mouth Then Slits His Throat)
(Jack And Jessica Return)
Jack--Were's Jasson
Jessica--I Dont Know
(They Call Out His Name No Reply)
Jack--He Prombley Got Scared And Went Home
Jessica--(Laughs
Jack--Lets Go In The Tent
Jessica--Ok
(They Go In The Tent And Start Makeing Out)
Jack--So Does This Mean Were Dateing
Jessica--I Hope So I Really Like Yu
Jack--I Really Like Yu Two
Jessica--(Smiles)
(They Keep Makeing Out)
(They Start To Get UnDressed)
Jessica--Whats That
Jack--What
Jessica--Something Just Hit My Leg
Jack--(Gets The Flash Light) (And Looks)
Jessica--(Screams)
(Its Jasson's Dead Body)
(Then They Hear A Wierd Voice)
(Someone Grabs Jack Jessica Screams)
(Person Slits Jacks Throat Cuts Open His Schomact Rips Out His Heart And Throw's It At Jessica)
(Jessica Takes Off Runing Person Runs After Her)
(Jessica Runs In The Woods And Trys To Hide In A Bush She Dont See Him No More)
(He Comes Up Behide Her Throws Her To The Ground And Starts Undressing Her She Trys To Fight Back But He's To Strong He Raps Her Until She Gets Lose Then She Runs To The Truck She Gets In And Locks The Doors She Sleeps There Until The Morning)
(Next Day She Goes To The Cops And Tells The What Happend)
(Both Boys Are Dead The Mudderer Is No Where To Be Seen)
(A Month Has Gone By And Jessica Is At The Park)
(She Fills A Pain In Her Schomact)
(Her Mom Takes Her To The Doctor)
Doctor--Here's A Cup Pee In This
(Jessica Pee's In The Cup)
(About Ten Minutes Later Doctor Walks Back In)
Jessica's Mom--So Whats Wrong With Her
Doctor--She's Pregant She's Goning To Be A Mom
Jessica--Ohh No (Starts Crying)
Jessica's Mom--Its Ok EveryThing Is Going To Be Ok I Promise
(That Night)
(Jessica Goes To Bed Hears A Voice She Jumps She Rembers The Voice)
(A Hand Goes Around Her Mouth)
(Its The Killer From The Night At Red Hill)
(She Bits His Hand And Takes Off Runing When She Goes Down Stairs She See's Her Mom And Little Brother Dead Laying On The Couch)
(He Grabs Her And Tapes Her Mouth)
(He Holds Back Her Hands And Tie's Her Up)
(She Kicks Him The The Knee And He Picks Up A Pole Of The Fire Place And Hits Her On The Head She Is Knocked Out)
(Two Hour's Later She Wakes Up In A Bed With A Man Beside Her)
(She Starts Screaming Then He Hits Her In The Schomact A Cupple Of Times)
Man--There Now The Baby's Dead!
Jessica--How Did Yu Know?
Man--I've Been Following Yu Since The Night At Red Hill Waching Ur Every Move
Jessica--But Why Me What Did I Do
Man--Its Nothing Yu Done Its Something Ur Mom Done A Long Time Ago
Jessica--What Did She Do
Man--Her And My Dad Were Together Engangd To Tell The Truth The Ur Mom Left Him For Ur Dad My Dad Moved On But Never Forgot Ur Mom He Beat Me And My Mom Out Of Anger And Rage I Swer To My Mom When He Killed Her I Would Hunt Down Ur Family And Kill Them All And Make The Every Last One Suffer I Found Yall On The New's When Ur Dad Died In That Car Wreek I Went To Ur House That Night Of Red Hill And Followed Yu From The Pool To Jacks House To Red Hill
Jessica--Then Why Did Yu Kill Jack And Jasson What Did They Do
Man--They Would Of Told On Me To The Cops I Didnt Plan On Yu Getting Away
Jessica--Plz Let Me Live I Didnt Do Nothing It Was My Mom Plz Just Spare Me Plz
Man--Im So Sorry But I Promised My Mom On Her Death Bed And I Will Keep That Promise
(He Tie's Her Down Srips Her And Rapes For For Hours)
(After That He Get's A Peice Of Meddle And Bands His Mother Name In Her Her Face)
Jessica--Plz Plz Just Kill Me Dont Make Me Suffer Any More
Man--Starts Beating Her With A Pole
(People Walking By Call's The Cops)
(Ten Minute's Later The Cops Show Up)
(They Arest Him)
(Jessica Gets Taken To The Hosbitle But Die's Two Days Latter After Days Of Surgrey)
(Man Gets Sent To Jail For Life But His 2.nd Day There He Hangs Him Self)
(Jessica Goes To Heaven And See's Her Faily And Jack And Jasson Again)
(But Man Goes To Hell And Burns For The Rest Of Time)
(THE END)
Tell Me What EveryOnee Thinks I Wrote That Srory(:
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Title:
A Night At Red Hill
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Artist:
Beautiful Suicide xoxo
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Description:
A Story I Wrote...
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Date:
01/13/2010
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Tags:
night
hill
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