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The story goes the peace will end,
in a war that fills the world,
a hero will come and save them all,
and the peace returns an all is saved,
this is a story that I know
I have told you this for a reason,
As she stood in front of the mirror she turned slightly,letting the sun glimmer of the tattoos that swirled around her arms,lower back,and stomach in mesmerising patterns ,seemingly black.In the sunlight she started to scowl,mad at herself for even caring about how she looked that day,''why should I even care,anyway,it's not like I'm going into town.''she thought.She slightly shudders at the thought of the city known as Mwar.
When she finished she grabbed her coat,ran outside,hopped on her bike,and rode off.
As soon as she was outside city limits she hit speeds that should be illegal(they are,really,but so is her motorcycle,and she never gets caught,for some reason).She rode for about an hour,along the old dilapidated highway,she turns on a road leading into an old forest,soon she stopped and abandoned her bike in some under brush on the side of the road(it being illegal in all)and looked around as if looking for someone.''All right,Rin come out,and for goodness sake stop acting like a child,even if you look like on.''she shouted into the thick and murky forest off to her left.
An angry Argh came from her left.''I'M NOT SHORT''shouted the small girl coming out of the forest on her left.She was about seventeen and 4'6 with short blue hair and her trademark goggles on top of her head,almost like a hair band.''I'm just small boned.''she said defensively. ''I bet you are...Thin boned too''she muttered under her breath.''Hey!I heard that,just because you're my cousin you cant be mean,Kimi.'' ''You know what?We should get going.''she said loudly.Rin,standing next to her now,stiffened with an expression of almost pain on her face.''You know you shouldn't do that,cous''she said quietly.''Sorry''she said.
Soon they were walking a forgotten path in the lonesome woods.Eventually they came to a bordering the Allyssian Ocean.''Well,now we are here,''Rin said happily. She walked to the cliff's edge and looked over,''its almost time,right?'' ''It is time''kimi said quietly.''YESS!''Rin shouted,and stepped backwards onto the edge of the cliff.Kimi,on the other hand stepped back into the shadows.Rin shouted towards the night sky ''Thank you,for all you've given me!''Kimi repeated this in the trees.
Suddenly Rin jumped off the cliff into the shadowy space between the edge of the cliff and the toxic Allyssian Ocean.
- by Delirious Bagels |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/13/2010 |
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- Title: twilight's end
- Artist: Delirious Bagels
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this is a rough draft of the book im working on,so criticise all you want,just be polite,please.
to all you nice people indulge yourself!not many people are nice to me so you deserve it,well thats not my point
I hope you enjoy my book(ish thing)
oh please note when I say bike I really mean motorcycle
and most of my names are off the top of my head,so,if you have any suggestions please say so
(including the title) - Date: 01/13/2010
- Tags: twilight
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