- I was 11 when this happened. One night, when I had gone to bed, I woke up to hear a noise and looked to my open bedroom door, where I saw a dark figure (which was outlined by the bathroom light remaining on) staring at me with red eyes. Thinking that it was my mother, I had called out to her multiple times, each time getting louder and louder. By the third time I called out to her, her red eyes did not move and I was getting frantic, screaming out to my mom and hiding beneath my covers.Come to find out my mother was in the living room fast asleep and had woken up from my calls, running into my room. When I looked at her, the black figure had gone and I have not seen it since. But I guess I had always been afraid after that of what might be watching me or threatening to harm me at any given moment. I know that was a demon…it was too dark and felt too evil…
- by MuscularPancake |
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- | Submitted on 10/08/2009 |
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- Title: Short Horror stories Part 1
- Artist: MuscularPancake
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Enjoy!(The Demon at The Door)
- Date: 10/08/2009
- Tags: short horror stories
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- Purple Apricot Potatoes - 04/05/2010
- I am soo very,very confused. Your mom has glowing red eyes??
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- Hybrid Defect - 10/28/2009
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This would be creepy to experience.
Unless it actually happened like that, I would recommend removing the red eyes. To me, if it has eyes, then it needs eyes; the less I can deduce what I'm looking at the more unnerving it becomes, especially if I want it to be something safe like my mother. - Report As Spam
- Im_ReMeMbErIn_SuNdAy - 10/10/2009
- umm...interesting...but why would red eyes make u think it was ur mother?
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