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Is it really the end? Could I really be laying here on my back while I watch my love die right in front of me? The cold stare from his eyes burned me more then the deep wound in my gut. Is it the end even if I live? The darkness of the night comforted me from the start of my death. It might have made me think of all of those I left but I found the darkness comforting more than anyone. But my past love was still the one I loved. But he is gone and so am I. We went different ways... He went to the light and I stayed in darkness waiting. The river of blood and death flows by and I can feel and see my body laying in it. The warm blood made me feel alive but my body could no longer give warmth. Darkness kept my mind cold but there. Other bodies sank and went into the light below. My eyes close and I continue my unusual journey through death. I saw Him in the mist of the darkness, he held his hand out and I took it. He gave me the choice to live once again. I had been in the darkness for too long and forgot what it feels to live and have emotions. But there was a catch... I had to do his deeds in the deep darkness of the night. I chose to do it and he owned my soul for as long as humanity lived and beyond.
The night was young and the feelings of fear and hatred rushed through my veins. It was time to start the hunt. On top of the build I stood watching the full moon brighten the ocean from a distance. My long dark black hair wiped my face from the wind. My foot steps forward and I fall into the dark tree tops. I land hard but perfect. My hands whip out my daggers and I begin to run after my prey like a wolf. My first night on the hunt was different but I must do my job. I was to hunt down and kill a rank 5, out of 8, demon. I might be a new demon slayer, but I do my job right. It was easy to find it, but the stench of it burned my nose. My daggers, made from werewolf bones, in my hands but hidin by my sleves. I found it by the the ocean waiting. Waiting! It must have seen me coming. NOT GOOD... I step back, pulling one of my daggers toward my face for protection, with a fearless expression. It turns around to show me its full body. I look closer, the look in its' eyes were not fear... but relief. A gasp comes to my lips in a form of a name... but I couldn't say his name. Is this a test? My hands start to tremble as he looks at me blankly. I can tell he is just as shock as I was. I thought I LOST him... FOREVER...
It was the one I once loved. I had loved him and he had loved me. Now that my soul belonged to someone else, I could no longer feel anything for the one that stood infront of me. He was my target and my kill for freedom. The choice I had, I could not make. Its' eyes were as shocked as mine. He remembered me even though my hair, eyes, and body were different.
"Why are you here?" he asked.
The sound of his voice shocked me out and I fled from the docks.
To Be Continued....
- by vampyre_kitty12 |
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- | Submitted on 09/26/2009 |
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- Title: Lifeless
- Artist: vampyre_kitty12
- Description: A battle for love or freedom.
- Date: 09/26/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- HIKIT.^^ - 01/10/2013
- It's a little confusing and muddled... I kinda also feel that you're getting dangerously close to the cliched 'gloomy/dark/depressing/angst-ridden' writting themes. Also, I don't know it the top paragraph is supposed to be a seperate thing (cuz it seems a little disjointed from the rest of the piece) and if this is the case, you need to show it's seperate (with like a line of dashes or something). If not, you need to find a way to make it flow better.
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- vampyre_kitty12 - 10/05/2009
- Please let me know what you think. it will help me improve my writing skills. Thank you!
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