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My feet echo against the wood as I walk down the deserted hall. I clutch my books to my chest as I pass the lockers. Cold air rushes against me and I feel deserted in this old school, but Ms. Anne should be here. Maybe she left, I wonder. Still, I continue on until I reach her classroom, relieved to see her lights on.
I knock on the door, no one answers. She must be out, I think.
I wait, but after five minutes, I can wait no longer, so I move the curtain, look inside- and freeze.
I can’t look away from the blood red eyes in front of me, staring as the others rip the flesh from animals. I suck in my breath and turn away, sure that I am dreaming, but I look again and they were still there. Ms. Anne looks up from her meal, blonde hair drenched red. She cocks her head to the right and stood up eerily. I clench my teeth and back up. When she reaches the door, I bolt down the hall, out the door, and into the street, but I can’t get away every where I look, she is there, after me, to kill me.
A cold hand touches my shoulder, and I whirl around to find her there, but it is too late, she sinks her teeth into my neck. The world is blurring and going dead for me. I give in with one last thought. My teaher's a vampire.
- Title: The Undiscovered World
- Artist: JACKxDAWN
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- Date: 08/02/2009
- Tags: undiscovered world vampires
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Wind-Blown Dandilion - 09/19/2009
- i must say i am amused... Sorry if that isn't the reaction you wanted but, it sounds a little funny, My teacher is a vampire. *Chortle* Still really good.
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- Purple-shoes616 - 08/16/2009
- Eh, honestly Im a little sick of the vampire bandwagon but Ill put that aside. The main problem with the piece is that it lacks voice and things just go on too quickly and pass without provoking any real thought or emotion.
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- XDSmart - 08/04/2009
- MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!
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- jazarona - 08/04/2009
- Omg! That is amazing! I absalutly love this!!!!!!!!!!!!
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