short look

• Artist: angelinye
• Description: A Glance at my book{'T-Squad'}.
• Date: 07/13/2009
• Tags:

The girls went to their room to surf S.W.I{Squad Web International}.On the web page the girls saw a list of squads from letters A-Z except the letter 'T' because the girls where the only 'T squad' and there is only supposed to be 1 squad per Alhpabet. xd

Comments

[SuperDitz]

2/5, but only cuz of the end. Take that how you wish.

[LeatherCoconut]

Um? and intro to a surfer story should maybe use a little more information, spelling could be better.
The story's glance is not good enough to make me even think about reading T-Squad because of how short and dull it is, spice it up with some words.
1/5
Rate Back?