- when i go 2 the beach all the boys gather around me as i get a son tan and when i swim because i look hot to them so now when i go to the beach i wear a descise so the dont jump me like they did last time i almost drounded won time i got told as i stood ont he beach i look like a adorible godess it warmed my heart i fell in love with that musculer man named devin my heart beat like crazy heart so we started to date and now every time we go to the beach it is the beach we met at!!! then he had to move away for college i was bursting with tears but i knew won day we would be united agin till then ill stay singel sad but happy story tobad it isnt true but i did date this guy named devin in till he had to go to college he wont be back in till next summer i wont no body till then smile .
- Title: how much of a beach babe im am
- Artist: hotyohoty
- Description: i look so good in my 2 piece bathensuit and i love the beach
- Date: 07/08/2009
- Tags: much beach babe
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Comments (3 Comments)
- cinnamon roIIs - 04/07/2011
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this isn't a very good story line...
and some punctuation, please. 2/5 - Report As Spam
- Rains_Melody - 07/18/2009
- i like the end part better im feeling nice so ill do 4/5 hey can u check my writing out plz and thank u
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- Violette Scarlette - 07/12/2009
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Ok...wow.
1. Learn how to spell, please.
2. You need to have punctuation and capitalization.
3. Nobody cares how 'hot' you looked in your two piece. - Report As Spam