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i woke up one morning to my cousins laughter in the dinning room. they are so retard.instantly i smell something nasty. eeewwwwwwww they farted in my room. i got up and sarted running to the dinning room when i slip on one of the crusty underwear.''great''. i got down stairs and when they saw me they laughed. ''so it one pimple grow up''.tit smelt bad in here to. these farter.i rubbed under my nose.instantly i knew something was there. i looked. it was baby poo. their laugh got loud. i grab the fork. i guess ill being telling this story for my cell.
thank you1!!!!!!
- by Akahana Chou |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/30/2009 |
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- Title: what that smell???
- Artist: Akahana Chou
- Description: this is fiction so it didnot really happen. it all so suspose to be funny so yea if it wack put a < if it hot put >.mini story
- Date: 06/30/2009
- Tags: smell
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Comments (2 Comments)
- beavisrose217 - 07/04/2009
- Spelling needs work, sentense is choppy and it wasn't really funny, nor did it make sense or flow together well.
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- Inked Okami - 06/30/2009
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Ummm... ><''
You should really work on your spelling. - Report As Spam
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