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Freezing cold, pitch black, soaking wet, and just to top it all of extremely creepy. Like at any moment something evil is about to jump out and attack you kinda creepy. I’ve never liked the dark, even now I get so scared sometimes that I sleep with a light on. I never really liked rain either. And yet there I was standing outside in the freezing rain in the middle of the night with my pajamas on. And of course tonight of all nights I choose to wear shorts and a t-shirt, no socks.
The worst thing though was I had no idea where I was. The last thing I remember was sitting in bed reading some stupid book. After that I had no clue what happened. I just found myself standing in the middle of the woods
The last time something like this happened it didn’t turn out well. I had to go to the hospital because of the amount of blood I was loosing. I had a huge gash on my head, a lot of little scratches on my legs and arms, and I was freezing cold.
I was nine when I had that dream. There was some sort of animal chasing me. And right before it was about to maul me to death I hit my head and woke up screaming my head off. Dad got so worried about all my dreams that he sent me to live with mom. She just handled these things better than dad. I just said whatever, the real reason was dad couldn’t handle it. He couldn’t handle that he might have a daughter who was a complete lunatic. He couldn’t handle all of my weird visions, dreams, and blackouts.
That was the last real dream I had in about eight years. I had other dreams but none of them got that bad. And now I was here in the middle of the woods praying that I was dreaming. I stood there for what seemed like hours. I think I finally realized that standing in the middle of the woods wasn’t a wise idea. And that I should at least try and find my way out. The whole thing was, I well I was too scared to move. Every where I looked it was pitch black and nothing but trees. I was surrounded with no idea of which way I should go. But in the end I decided to go off to my right.
- Title: Vampire Nightmare
- Artist: Bartamas
- Description: just one of my vampire stories in the works, i would really appreciate some feed back, be as brutal s you want.
- Date: 06/07/2009
- Tags: vampire nightmare
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Chiako Ai - 06/07/2010
- Oh it just gives me chills!!!!!!! What's going to happen next?!?!?!?!?!
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- GAlA Site Developer 2 - 07/22/2009
- cool
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- vampire19710 - 06/14/2009
- cooleo if u wriet more message me!!
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- Ninja naruto92 - 06/09/2009
- vary good
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- Pillow3 - 06/09/2009
- wow kind of good biggrin Congrats!!!
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- Onyxrose24 - 06/08/2009
- pretty good. Actualy i think it's better than my story!
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