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geek,nerd,loser all average comments to him
smart,low self-esteem,slow reflexes,weakling all problems for christopher
sirhc,chris,christopher his every day identity and nothing else
chris i saw him the day when all that changed
when he died,when he finaly changed
an average day,a strange feeling like something was wrong
he came to me to tell me something, he looked really nervous
a pause,as his eyes opened wide in fear,
a push,as he forced me out the way,
a thump,as a tree landed hard upon him
I freaked out and ran over to where he lay underneath that forsaken tree
I stared in horror, cause there he lie a big bloody grin spread across his face,i wanted to scream at him,why are you smiling!?,my hand lie upon his chest his cold cold chest,..1...2...3...4...5...6...7...8...9...10...his heart stoped,as I counted he whisper ten last words to me
I..I..have to tell you...I..I....love you..,
as his tenth breathe gave out
in just ten seconds
in tens breathes
with ten words
and ten heart beats
the world ablaze around me,kids screaming bloody murder,sirens blaring in unison, i was pulled let me go!,as i finaly broke free running back to his cold body,I forced myself to a stop when I saw his expressionless face,I ran jumping right next to him,i wanted to no I had to see his smile again,smile!i screamed out in hysteria,then i was forced off him away from where he died,i cried for what seemed like ten long hours,unable to get his grinning face out of my head,he was so stupid why would he smile?!why didn't he smile again?!i wanted to scream out to the world,I went out at ten and picked up the newspaper,on the tenth article it read
local hero saves young girl on tenth street,on a courageous or stupid act he saved a young girl from a falling tree,they say it took exactly ten seconds for the tree to land on him,christopher will now be known as a hero.
I set the paper down,and pictured his smile and I smiled and cried,I hate that stupid smile!i thought to myself,I attended his fueneral,old enemies,friends, and relatives filled the seats,every single person shed a tear,When they called me up to say some words on his behalf,everyone stared at me,because as i walk along those rows of endless weeping chairs,a big grin lie upon my face,because when i went to see his coffin,I found he was wearing glasses,and i thought he doesn't want to be remembered like that,so i took them from his face and as i stare at his cold dead face, I belive I saw him smile,such a stupid smile I whisperd to myself as I left the fueneral
I woke up under a bright blinding light,I lifted his hand up to his face,in my hand he found an newspaper with the tenth article circled,I read it and smiled
as i realized i could see perfectly without my glasses.
hero, was what he heard everyday
smart,stupid,courageous,were his actions
hero,love,was what he was called
- by ILikeBabyBarPoo |
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- | Submitted on 05/26/2009 |
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- Title: ten
- Artist: ILikeBabyBarPoo
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Description:
inspired by "her"
sadly it's not nearly as good,
chris i saw him the day when all that changed
when he died,when he finaly changed
an average day,a strange feeling like something was wrong
he came to me to tell me something, he looked really nervous
a pause,as his eyes opened wide in fear,
a push,as he forced me out the way,
a thump,as a tree landed hard upon him
- Date: 05/26/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Child-of-Darkness-1234 - 06/02/2009
- holly shoot thats good!!! you should write more
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- Mechromancer4Life - 05/30/2009
- Awwwwww that is wonderful. I really loved it.
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- ILikeBabyBarPoo - 05/26/2009
- i appreciate if you add comments sending advice or your opinions please and thank you
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