just a story i might write

• Artist: Vizrk
• Description: cool.
• Date: 05/22/2009
• Tags: just story might write

Rolo...yes,mother have you seen Ed?I think he went into town to do something oh ok.Ed lillyann how are you fine you better you know since the accedint at methidral.Oh my I almost forgot about seems how I don't live near their.I wonder what brings you down here into the town?me oh nothing nothing really.hmp that was nearly three years ago bro forget the past.shut up Bastian what I'm just sayin it cause you never let things go.watch out huh.wow!close call look out its comin back.ahhh lets get out of what was that noise.uhhhh bastian run no,yes get out of hear with the treasure you must survive fine.whoosh slash ching ugh so strong.uhh poof whered they go.

Comments

[Vizrk]

its called being careless and its not like ill do this if i where to write it

[X The Programmer X]

Well, if you ever write it, don't forget to put in quotations when people are speaking, and to write down actions and descriptions of their feelings, the place they are at, etc. Also, don't forget about grammar and spelling, because you missed out of those in this too.
Actually, if you always write like this, I hope you are five years old or something. You learn grammar in grade one for Christ's sake...