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I walk the streets of a big city...the name of it escapes my mind..i am wearing a long coat, with a red scarf...im shivering...my clothes arent thick enough...im hurt..i was cut by something...earlier today..i was attacked by a wolf-like creature...now i walk the alleys of this cold city...soon its gonna be night...i dont know where i am...or how to get home for that matter...now even as i walk..my mind is trafficked with thoughts of that creature..what or who was that?
an hour later...i arrive in a bar..i move up to the counter and ask the bartender if i can use his phone..the man looks at my clothes then gestures to the phone in back..
after i dial the numbers, and hang up...no answer..two roguish men approach me...a few minutes later im knocked around...my vision comes to...im bound to a chair..the same two men are beating me around...they seem to know me..as im trying to convince them i had nothing to do with their friend who was killed earlier that day...i feel a rage coming up withn me..
It isnt natural..or subtle for that matter...the men then back away in fear...the chair breaks...i catch a glipmse of my arm...my clothes being ripped to shreds...my flesh turns to fur...white fur...there was a mirrior in the corner...i catch a glimpse of myself...im growing to large proportions...my face is being streched into a wolf shape...my teeth are fangs...my eyes are red as blood...i break free of my bindings...now my energies are pure rage...i grab one of the thugs and tear his body in half...then i grab the other and throw him into the mirrior...he lays there lifeless...i break through a wall...then a few minutes later...i find myself on a roof top...naked...im holding some clothes that i stole from a sleeping homeless man..as im putting them on...
i hear a crack behind me...but im not in a forest..im on a high rise roof..i turn around and i see a black cloaked werewolf moving toward me...the wolf speaks...you have expericned your first transformation...the next one will be more...permanent if you will...if you want to be with people who accept you for what you are...come to the abandoned mansion on the outside of town...knock on the door...you will be asked a question...what is the beautiful thing you see in blackness? you will tell the voice..the Moon, my brother...as quickly he was there he was gone....i thought about it...yes...he's right...people know what i am...an hour later...i finally arrive at the place..i squint through the snow...the mansion is well constructed...i open a gate and move to the front door..
I knock on it, i observe the door while doing so...its ornate...well designed..then i hear a hoarse voice boom through the quiet snowy night...the voice asked the question...what is the beautiful thing you see in the void? i reply the Moon my brother...
I hear the door unlock...i go inside...The Introduction into the Fur is complete...
- by FenrirTheVicious |
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- | Submitted on 05/07/2009 |
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- Title: Introduction into the Fur
- Artist: FenrirTheVicious
- Description: Another Creature of the night is introduced, some of you may have read my other story *Introduction into The Children* this is similar but better...
- Date: 05/07/2009
- Tags: introduction into
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Comments (5 Comments)
- LeatherCoconut - 07/16/2009
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mmm I like the way you wrote it in first person, maybe as a tough guy blandly telling a story, but...grammar is important and you didn't really follow the rules, (such as the i's). Spelling was okay for the most part but you could use spell check alittle for the quick errors.
As for the style, I liked it, but maybe instead of writing just in his point, you could add a few scenes around.
3/5
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- xxMisty_visionsxx - 05/15/2009
- good story!
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- mychemicalsweetheart - 05/14/2009
- veery nice
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- Zerathi - 05/09/2009
- wow i like this XD
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- darkangel-shadow - 05/08/2009
- this is so amazing fen!
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