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There was once two vampires in their own individual races. The female Ikumi-san. A pure-blooded vampire. Then there is Isaka-kun. A wolf- vampire. He was naturally a vampire, although his parents got killed by a clan of fox-vampires who highly despised the race and Isaka`s family. Isaka was only 5 and they did not want to take the child`s life. The head fox-vampire leader Misaka bit him and let him free. Ikumi walked into the woods and saw Isaka lay there unconscious. She began to help him up but she saw his birthmark of his race. She began to panic and she just began to tear up in her own fear and she helped him up and lead him into a near home in a bed and she ran for her life.
14 years later, Ikumi travels to New York City to become a model. She spent 7 years in her home in Tokyo training herself in fighting for self-defense. Her mom and dad were very talented in their fighting skills and she wanted to follow their glorious foot steps. Ikumi is starting over and is trying to find a job in a mall.
Meanwhile.... Isaka-san is also in New York City for a vacation. He is trying to travel to many cities in the world. Isaka-san sees Ikumi and thoughts rush in his head. "Do i know this girl?" "Is she the one from the time 14 years ago when she helped me up?"
He sniffs the air gracefully and his eyes begin to widen. "She is the pure-blood..."
Her eyes strike his and her eyes begin to widen. "It can`t be..."
Isaka runs off into the night trying to refuse to bite anyone. He clenches his own throat and his eyes turn blood red.
"That girl..."
To be continued
Teaser:
Will Ikumi and Isaka hit it off? Will they become enemies? Will their fate ever be declined and forgotten? Read part 2 when it is posted to find out!
- by CorruptedSadness |
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- | Submitted on 04/07/2009 |
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- Title: Crossed fates/Crossed Rivals
- Artist: CorruptedSadness
- Description: This is a story i just wrote and i got randomly inspired so i just kept writing and here! My very first to be put on a website. Please leave nice comments and don`t claim any work of mine. ^-^ Please vote for me!
- Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: crossed fates orcrossed rivals
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Chaos Daemon94 - 12/07/2009
- needs a better plot/setting. I know this is your first one, but it needs to be a bit more organized.The plot has been used before, except in a different manner (underworld). organize it better, mix your fantasy elements into your modern day parts, it will help out. also make a biography of your characters, it will help you out. for a first attempt 3/5
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- CorruptedSadness - 04/16/2009
- o//o Ehehehee.....o-0 0 -o my first story i repeat ><
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- InkheartGirl165 - 04/15/2009
- um.... random. I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be mine. But the plot is kinda, well, used. I've read it in other books. And the random part, well, is from her being a model and going to NYC. I mean, I just can't picture it. Cuz ur story started out mythical, but in the middle, was random and realistic, and towards the hanging ending, mythical again.
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