- he sat down slowly his long white silky wings draped down behind him,gave off a yellow golden glow in the midd day sun set, dark brown hair came choppy over his eyes short in the back long strips of hair on the sides came down past his chin you could see his ears popping out on the sides. light blue eyes stood unmoved staring off into the distances... all alone he sat there on old rusty rail road tracks the tracks seemed to stretch out for forever into the horizon in both directions (left to right) no cars,roads houses or ppl in sight the whole world seemed at a stand still around him... all butt the sun tha seemed even deeper in the horizon than before...he brought his eyes back down to his cigaret took a second then brought his hand slowly to his pursed lips took a long drag then slowly brought his hand back down resting at his side closed his eyes and tried to picture her it seemed like eons ago that he had last seen her smile and giggle,held her in his arms touched and kissed her... then a tear streamed down his face... and all hiss happiness turned into a crud grown as he died on the inside... he felt like ripping off his wings wanting to die... anything was better than suffering another day with out her... emo
- by bwett_rawr |
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- | Submitted on 04/03/2009 |
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- Title: an angles cry
- Artist: bwett_rawr
- Description: umm it took me less than 20mins tell me wha i need to correct and if theres anything tha would sound good
- Date: 04/03/2009
- Tags: angles
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- luv my babyface101 - 04/04/2009
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great job i love your story...full sadness and sorrow-i can picture a great movie in my mind. keep writing. you're really good at it.
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