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God has sent two angels from heaven
The angels would observe his creations
the angels would go in a guisse
the guisse of poor people
if there was anything wrong
the angels were allowed to intervene
one day the angels went to a wealthy mans' estate
they knocked on the door and the wealthy man answered
"what is your business here?" the man asked
the older angel replied "We wish to stay for the night?"
"well i guess the basment is empty"
during the night the older angel found a crack on the wall
he observed it and sealed it
the younger angel asked "Why do you help a man with this much money"
the older angel replied "It's not what it seems"
in the morning the angels were escorted out of the estate
during the day they found an old farmer living with his wife
they were poor people
the elder angel asked "May we stay the night?"
the farmer said "Of course"
the farmer and his wife gave their beds to the angels
and slept outside in the rain
during the night the elder angel wandered
and the young one followed
the elder angel took the life of the couples only cattle
the young one asled "Why did you do this?"
the elder replied "It's not what it seems"
in the mourning the farmer bade them goodbye
during the walk the younger angel asked
"Why did you help one who has everything in this worldwhile you let those poor farmers lose the only bit of cattle they had? One man had everything the farmers had none. Why did you do this?"
the elder angel replied "Its not what it seems"
"then tell me what exactly is it"
the elder angel said
"In the crack in the wall of the rich mans' house was filled with gold and jewels that had been stolen, I sealed it up so he would not retrieve them. The farmers may have had nothing, but they valued their lives. The angel of death came for the farmers wife so i gave him the cow instead. Now they live together still"
the younger one said
"I apologize for my rudeness to you... I did not know"
"I know you did not, and a lesson learned: Everything is not what it seems"
- by v-ultimatum |
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- | Submitted on 02/12/2009 |
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- Title: not what it seems
- Artist: v-ultimatum
- Description: everythings not what it seems...
- Date: 02/12/2009
- Tags: everythingisnotwhatitseems
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Dissolve the Pain - 02/18/2009
- thats pretty good..3/5
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- Nerai Kentouken - 02/13/2009
- Ah! it's rather interesting, and a good concept of morle. 3/5. still, you need to start a new paragraph every time a person spaks, and you need to end it with "He said" Or "She asked" use other words as well. you maylike to read my entry, comment and vote plz!
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