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Renaiku: Zack Now what.
Zack: I don't know.
A guys bumps zack
The guy: hey watch were your going.
Zack: Your the one who bumped me.
The guy biggrin o you know who i am i am the cheta.
Renaiku: I never heard of him.
Zack: Anyway lets just keep on walking.
Cheta: Were you going i demand a apologie.
Zack: for what, for u bumping me hell no.
Cheta: Fine you and me ring battle.
Zack: fine i will take you on.
They went to the arena and started battaling. Then cheta took out this strange ring.
Zack: What ring is that.
Renaiku: Yea zack yo go i am your biggest fan blaugh
Cheta: you mest with the wrong guy. I use forbiden ring delta drain.
Admin: !!!!! (Were did he get that ring. I have to stop the match before its to late.
The delta drain ring hit Zack and all you saw was Zack on the floor disapiring.
Admin: Damn Cheta you are forbiden and banned. I use jailer ring.
Cheta was trapped in the time of space for ever.
Renaiku: WTf ZACK!!!!!!!
Admin: It might be over for him.
Renaiku: dont you have tha ring that brings him back.
Admin: Yes but the ring used on him is forbiden. I might be able to bring him back with a 3 rings that are over 3.5
Admin use the ring and brought zack back.but not xcactly.
Admin: I brought him back but he could be anywere are anytime. He could be back with a diffrent name. You live your life normaly. While i find the new name of his user.
Renaiku: ...............bull crap. i guess i just have to wait.
To be continued
THE END
- by BlueXEnigma |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/13/2009 |
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- Title: Renaik's zomg life 2
- Artist: BlueXEnigma
- Description: Zack's final stand.
- Date: 01/13/2009
- Tags: renaiks zomg life
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Comments (3 Comments)
- BlueXEnigma - 01/15/2009
- format in which way do u mean. writing the story like this is simple and gives you a good a idea of whats happening and who is speaking.
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- BlueXEnigma - 01/15/2009
- lol i dont know if that was a compliment or not but thanks
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- kirisake - 01/13/2009
- wow. this is the ultimate suck... but its so ADDICTING. i CANT STOP READING IT. if its format was better, you might have a good story on your hands. 4/5
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