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Night,Darkness,and the Hole:
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The noise gets loader each time.It's pounding in my ears.I scream with every inch of energy left in me."STOP!Stopppp...." I sobb into my tatered jacket. "Ple..a..se-sobb-stop the noise" This is what life is like. My whole life a fun game for some sick person. Fianlly,a small wind covers my body damp and filthy. The voice that taught me things has come a gain. I slip into a quick and dream-less sleep. I wake up,agin overcome with pain and horrors. Well, I was born into the world of sins. I pay the consequenses for what animals and plants do.I pay with noise,fire,blood,and love. I heard that word once.The wind just taught me it before. Before it went away.I never heard it again. I see every horrible thing anything has ever done.I see birds eating each other for a male bird. Humans doing war. One day I will get out.One Day.When will one day come.
- by The Garden of Eatin |
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- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: Night,Darkness,and the Hole
- Artist: The Garden of Eatin
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Description:
A little me and A little adventure A little bit of what I want to be.I think youll like it but if you dont like it dont like
Comment so I can edit later
there will be more - Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: nightdarknessand hole
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Arden Snow - 04/01/2009
- A bit vague.
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- The Garden of Eatin - 01/05/2009
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Ie luve u
since you like spelling
You are the coolest person ever!>~< - Report As Spam
- Puddlezinn Mudd - 01/02/2009
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well, I liked it. Spelling errors don't make a story bad. 4.7/5
since I can't put 4.7 as a real rating, i'll round up to 5 - Report As Spam