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The Story beggains in an old house in 2006 of june. were lived 5 people in that house next door there were was a family or 9 people.
It all began on that one day or june like june 4th to be exact. There was one night there hit a fire in the north quarters of the house in that room was the 13 year old son and the 4 month old baby. an hour later the 12 year old daughter woke up to the sound of her older brother waking her up. she was in so much shoke and could barly breath and her longs were so weak she felt like dieing inside her bed. she lifted her-self out of bed and climb out of the room. her and her older brother manson were stuck and couldnt breath. they were trying to get out of the mess but yet they were heading into the fire its-self. I am Tifony and i was crolling behind and my brother stop infrunt of me. he told me not to move and i did'nt. i fled for my life thoughs seconds waiting and wondering if i was gonna die becaouse of Zack. He did'nt move or anything he stood there and i wonderd and then i finoly moved and got next to him and asked with a shaky voice wat are we stoping for? He stood there and he looked at my other brothers. one lying in there beds and one in a crib and they were scraming as i was inside of my chest. i wanted to do somthing so bad but i couldnt move and my heart sonk with ever second watching them. i finolly thought about a way to get them out after all they were blood. and i knew it. i ran on my knees to my brothers bed and i said get out and hit the fire with my hand and my older brother Zack stood there watching till he got wat i was trying to get dont Zack got the rast of that fire off of my older brother. i ran on my feet and grabd my younger brother in the crib. right when i did that the fire shot trought the window and i got a charp glass in my hand and i could feel it hit a vein. i couldnt think i stood there. till my older brother grabed me and got me to the ground and then the door banged open and firemen came running in i saw about 2 maybe 3 or 4 but it happened all so fast i couldnt see then correctly. i saw only waves of there faces. it was like i was time traviling. i could hear the soft wave of the outside air.
i could hear my mother crying my name in the air. and then all after that i was put into an abulence with my younger borther in my hands. they took him away in the same one. i could see then put things on me and i saw faces but still no straight face without moving my youger brother was'nt breathing so i saw them all crying for medosion and air and i herd shounds but they were so dim i couldnt hear them as well i as i wished i did. i couldnt belive were i was.
I fadded away in the abulence and i couldnt see everything after that all i knew was my younger brother was'nt breathing and i couldnt see straight. and i knew for sure i might die that night. i inhald to much fire air. my lungs were colapsing inside me. i was in the hospital and woke up with a nedly in me. I YELLED i hated needles so much i almost wanted to pull it out but then i couldnt think that way it was the only thing keeping medison in me at that time. i could hear my mother and father out-side the door talking with the doctor. i could only hear a cupple of word i only herd "die" and "might" and "Zack" and then the other word i couldnt hear anymore because i couldnt think as well with medison going into me with the nurse next to me. i was scard for my life i was going to lose my brother zack. he saved my life waking me up and all. so i had to ask when my mom & dad came back. . .
My mom & dad did;nt come back they went to another room thinking i was asleep i couldnt think with quiet. i livind with people screaming and my mother yelling at everyone for not doing things i couldnt think at all. i fell asleep that evening and my mom & dad left for the nurse as i woke up. i could'nt belive i was not gonna beable to see my brother is he did die. i knew i wanted to kill him for so long.
But theres a BIG DIFF. between family kill and real kill.
I didnt hear anything that night i only herd the clock. and the sounds of peoples life support going off and people crying i herd that a cupple of times and i had to eat the most nasty food in the world while i was there. i couldnt think when it was night.
- by Xx Princess Lollipop xX |
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- | Submitted on 01/01/2009 |
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- Title: "Die" "Zack" "Might"
- Artist: Xx Princess Lollipop xX
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Description:
Its about a gurl who loses everything in her life any wonders if its a sign not to stay alive.
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~Bye: Megan
Copyright 2009 @Megan Inc. - Date: 01/01/2009
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