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Yuck. Love is sickening. Everyone's going around arm in arm getting ready for the prom. Shopping for dresses, suits, heels, shoes, and accessories. So irratating. I'm just standing by the walls watching all the couples pass by. Its just so irratating. I'm daydreaming, thinking of my crush asking me out to the prom... But everyone knows that that's never going to happen. Oh well. At least I'm going with my best friend Miki. I keep telling her to go to the prom with Kotauru but does she? Nope. She keeps denying that she likes him... They keep fighting... Its so obvious that she likes him. Prom is a week from now and I still don't have a date. Sigh... I guess I have to deal with it. "Hey Suzuka!!!" I knew that voice anywhere. It was my love. Jake Niaka... "What's up Jake?", I said when he came over. "You wanna go shopping with Miki, Kotauru, and me?" "Sure." "Then we'll pick you up at 6." "Okay." Yes. We're gonna go prom shopping.
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1-18 Wednesday 6:00 p.m.
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Okay. As long as Mika's there, I won't break down. Its 6 already. And I still never chose out an outfit to wear... -Ring- Oh no! They're here already! I ran downstairs opened the door and he was there. Thank goodness I was wearing my favorite outfit. "Ready to go?", asked Jake. "Yup." When we got there, we went shopping and of course we got tired. So we had to sit down. "Suzuka?", asked Miki. "What's up Miki?" "About me and Kotauru... Uhm..." "You guys are what?! Going to the prom together? After you said you weren't going to go with him?!" I had to get out of there quick or else I would've been a wreck. I ran to the bathroom and stood above the sink. I needed to relax I thought to myself. I walked very calmy through the bathroom door. And then bam! Jake was outside waiting for me. He said my name and he kissed me. I ran away form him too. This was too much to handle in one day. I took the bus home and ran straight to my room and started crying.
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1-21 Saturday 6:00 a.m.
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-Ring ring ring ring ring- Who the heck was calling me this early?! Its only six in the morning for crying out loud! I checked who it was. It was Jake. I answered quickly. "Hello?" "Hey Suzuka. I'm really sorry about what happened on Wednesday." "Its okay Jake. Don't worry about it." "But its not okay Suzuka! There's a reason why I did that!" I was silent. "Suzuka. I've liked you ever since the beginning of 9th grade. You were the first person I ever saw that day. You were really nice to me. And I really liked you for that. Now, my feelings have changed. I don't like you. I love you Suzuka." "Jake. I have to confess too. I liked you also since the beginning of 9th grade. Now I love you too." "Will you go to the prom with me?"
- by Xx asiandoll xX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: My Love Chapter: Chapter 1
- Artist: Xx asiandoll xX
- Description: 17 year old Suzuka, a senior in high school is tired of being by herself all the time... Then her crush does something unexpected...
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: love chapter
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Shr00mHe4d N1kk1 - 02/07/2009
- C-O-R-N-Y! lolz. it's good though. i'll give it a 4/5
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- KevYou - 01/01/2009
- that was cool sarah (kotAuru) yay!
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- musicx125 - 01/01/2009
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great job!!! continue the story please!!! coz i want to c what happens nxt. muahahaha!!!
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- iiS T U D D-M U F F I Nii - 01/01/2009
- wow ur story actualy made me smile thats realll nice u hav a talent...=D
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