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I look down upon white clouds and blue ocean. All I hear is the wind rushing past my ears and the thump of my dragon's wings. My long black hair flows behind me, my metal wrist bands are cold as ice. "Sarah, look ahead," says a voice in my head. My dragon swings her head to look at me. Ahead I see a city, its sky scrapers tower into the clouds. "I see Sterling. We have to find somewhere to land. Fly higher," I reply. Immediately we rise. I can see fog streaming from Sterling's nostrils. My legs grow cold. "I should have wore pants," I state. "Soon," she replied, "You will learn to dress warmly, little one."
Suddenly a flame burst from the clouds below us. A blood red dragon soon rises through hole. On it's back was a rider. They were clad in black armor. Sterling dived, her navy blue scales glittered in the sunlight. I could see the fire in her eyes. She missed. She then rolled to attack the under belly. I lost my grip and fell through the sky. My vision blurred and I flashed back to how I got Sterling's egg, only three short weeks ago.
- by Dragon legs |
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- | Submitted on 12/27/2008 |
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- Title: Dragonwings
- Artist: Dragon legs
- Description: I kinda just made it up for this, i was very bored. If you want more say so. Plz criticize
- Date: 12/27/2008
- Tags: dragonwings dragon flying
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Comments (3 Comments)
- BleachGirl94412 - 03/04/2009
- 3/5 i like the redo better...i dunno y maybe cuz i read it first but this lacks sumthin
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- Dragon legs - 01/02/2009
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kk thnx
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- freakleaf - 01/02/2009
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ah i know what story was your inspiration ^_^
really good, the only thing i would say you need to improve on is the setting. It's a great start, it could be better though!try describing the skyline of the city you are coming up on, the character has only gotten the egg three weeks earlier, basically, she's never ridden a dragon before. Put yourself in her place, it's like seeing the world in a completely new light. So try and describe that light! - Report As Spam