- Sitting in her room…she waits and waits…for something new…for someone to come and save her from every horrible thing she knew… sometimes she wonders what to do….looking out into the darkness…it holds nothing new… she hears a knock on her door… “This is Something new” she thinks….she opens the door and sees you… her something new…turned out to be you…she fell in love…you loved her too…love was all new to her…she didn’t know how…or why this happened….but then she realized her new thing to love forever would be you and only you…you looked at her….wondering why she would love you…and seeming as if she knew what you were thinking…she said.. “I love you…And only you…because you are the something new I have been waiting for...through the dark you found me…so I know this love must be true…” she smiled at him….he smiled back…he held her and never let go…he had found his true love as much as she had found her something new….he stayed by her side every night….he loved her too…some nights when the world lay silent and still….she fell asleep in his arms… as his lips gently kissed her forehead tonight…they lay together untouched by the world and its cruel grasp…because they found all they needed….never again will the girl need something new…..
- by I_Rawr_Shu |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: Love Story
- Artist: I_Rawr_Shu
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i wrote this cause i was bored and my internet wasnt working.. xDD
please comment and rate
:] - Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: love story
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Comments (5 Comments)
- crazy-ani-girl - 06/24/2009
- this was good but i think this should be a poem. Good job though.
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- Jendayi Assassin - 01/25/2009
- its really nice! i think the "..."s kinda add to the mood, but isnt this more of a poem than a story?
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- natly12_33 - 12/21/2008
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=^.^= story of my life! lol
i love it <3 - Report As Spam
- police bocks - 12/21/2008
- coool an sup person that i feel like commenting on.
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- iTechnofied RaWr - 12/21/2008
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WoOt~ First cmnt. <33
It's kewl. ;] nBut to many " ... " Dx
5/5 ;] - Report As Spam