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Here i am. In a very busy airport bathroom toilet, waiting for my flight number to be called.Time passing by, like a turtle trying to go up a steep mountain...HURRY UP , I shouted. Every one stopped and stared. I pretended it never happened, and they went on. '576' finally THAT was my flight number. I pushed through the bathroom doors, running towards the boarding entrance. Handed them my ticket and walked in.
I was on a trip moving towards the Philippines from California. I'm only 8 but I've don't his before. It was gonna be a 18 hour flight. I was in 1st class waiting to be served. But that's when it happened, the pilot lost control of the plane and down we swerved in a circular formation. 'BOOM' the plane crashed onto the earth! burning_eyes I just sat there, thinking i was dead. i lifted my head 'BONK' "ouch" that hurt. I lifted the piece if metal off my head and looked around. I was in the spooky woods! All by myself! I looked around, dead bodies everywhere in sight...I, KAMRY, was the only survivor.
I looked around, trying to find my bag. I grabbed in from the bush and got my first aid kit out. I bandaged up my wounds and ate my apple. Afterward, I set off, in look for shelter.
WELL THAT WAS THE FIRST PART OF MY STORY!!! (chapter 1 + intro.) I HOPED YOU LIKED IT!! PLZ LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS!
- by xXDark_Queen132Xx |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: a weerd story
- Artist: xXDark_Queen132Xx
- Description: i wrote this when i was listening to a CD my math teacher gave me...it was the thought that counted so i tried it and here it is ^-^ hope u like it its my first story ever. a picture is there to show you how i felt when i wrote this story
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: weerd story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Stellar Witch - 09/28/2009
- Good job, though a bit hectic, but you could be better if you polished your material!
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- PrincessJesyxoxo - 03/17/2009
- that was pretty good...more plzzzzzzzz lol
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- xXDark_Queen132Xx - 12/30/2008
- hmmmm
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