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The mist clouded my vision, maybe for the better so i didn't have to see the lurid image of the car crash. I pulled myself from the tangled mess of metal that used to be my car so I could bleed out the rest of my energy looking up into the foggy night. I tried to remember the events that leading up to me dieing on the side of the road, unknown, uncaring.
I was driving home from Northbend I had to pick up a few last minuet Christmas gifts. I love Christmas; it was a time when I could say, "Screw you world, I'm going home". once I passed Fall City, a light fog appeared. I didn't give it much thought at the time, I was the only driver on the road for miles. The closer I got to Issaquah, the thicker the fog got. I then started to get worried so I slowed down to 40 mph. I started to panic once I saw the tail lights of other cars. I moved to the right most lane and slowed down to 30 mph. I was so happy when I saw the first lights of town. But suddenly I felt a jolt from behind and I felt the car go off the road. I only had glimpse of what happened. A car was going way too fast for this fog and was shifting lanes when he hit my left side, pushing me off the road. i hit a try and ended up in my current predicament. It was almost funny, I'm going to die because i was being safe by pulling over to the right lane and slowing down. The last sound I heard was the sirens scream towards me, too late, before I blacked out.
"..... Am I dead?" my thoughts echoed in my mind. My answer was the beeping of an IG, beeping in my ear, showing my heart-beat. I'm alive, I get to go home and see my family. Oh thank god!
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Just something I threw together. vote and comment
- by electrowolf |
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- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: just a quickie
- Artist: electrowolf
- Description: just something i threw together today at school
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: just quickie
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Comments (3 Comments)
- electrowolf - 12/10/2008
- ok just to be clear, there are three paragraphs and yes the second one is long but if you haven't seen a longer paragraph then screw you, read some more
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- Chocolate D Strawberry - 12/10/2008
- aawww so sweet d^_^b nice job 10/5
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- Evil Bunni - 12/10/2008
- The reason I gave you a two was because you told me to 'VOTE 5!', which I think is one of the most obnoxious thing ever. I would have given it a three, but I think you need to work on paragraphs, since the second one goes on and on forever.
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