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A lonely car Makes its way down the moonlit road. As she peered through her windshield, the fog was at dashboard height. Her headlights barely damaging the thick clouded form. She looked up at the bright orange moon.
"Is it always like this?"She asked the man beside her. "Its kind of Erie."She said. Her hands tightened around the black leather steering wheel. Her eyes darting around watching for stray animals or such.
"Babe, Calm down. It's Maine, what could happen"He asked the driver. "this is the best place for our honeymoon. Nice, quiet, discrete."He said. "No one to really bother us." He kissed the side of her head.
"I have to watch the ro--"she started in a giggling voice. A shadow moved across the Fog and she hit the brakes hard hearing a thud.
"Whoa Mary! What the hell was that!?"Her husband yelled.
"Oh my god! I think I hit something James!"Mary Yelled.
"I'll go check it out."James said. He stepped out of the car with a flashlight and walked to the back of the car. He heard a noise to his left and looked, the fog was still too thick for the flashlight beam. Mary sat in the car with the radio on when she heard a thud. She got out and looked around, James' Flashlight beam shown from behind the left rear tire.
"James?!"She called. "James? This isn't funny!"she said shakily."James Cut it out or I'm Leaving you behind." She whined. She looked down to see some blood spots. "Alright I'm leaving you behind!"She yelled heading to the Front of the car. She heard a rustling noise from her left. Just as she turned a deer ran out and around her car followed by two more and a few birds. She clasped her hands over her chest as she caught her breath and chuckled softly. She turned back and got her car keys out as they fumbled in her hands and fell to the cold hard paved road. Something seemed to watch her from the woods. Mary got down on her knees and fumbled under the car for her keys. Something rustled behind her and she stood up. Just as she turned around--
IT ATTACKED!
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!"
- by Daltry Graives |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/07/2008 |
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- Title: The woods Have eyes
- Artist: Daltry Graives
- Description: This is a sample from a story I am currently writing, Main characters are NOT James and Mary ofcourse. I used them to Start it as a Hook. My Main Characters Are soon to come, I might post my story in the forums when I am done, though it will be in sections of course haha
- Date: 11/07/2008
- Tags: woods have eyes sample story
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- Color Film - 11/13/2008
- omfgzorz! so random, buti likes it. O_o
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