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I used to be an angel, born and raised in Heaven, I was gonna take the throne after God. All that was gone after I turned 6 and got kidnapped by Satan armies, alothough they lost, they got "ME", who was the strongest of them all. Now, I am Satan's minion , strongest of all his minions. I take after Satan's side, killing any angels i could seek.
I will be always strong as long as I have my pleasure of killing. I take after the dark side now. Now, we will invade Heaven. As we invaded Heaven, I went to Go's temple and quickly killed him making me the rule of Heaven, then I realized that I was born in Heaven, but got kidnapped, but I take after my darkness! My darkness and goodness fought over on who's the ruler, while they're fighting, Satan happily ruled Heaven, then my good side controlled over my darkness. I started transforming, Now i have White wings, white body, white eyes, whie hair, white cloths and a dark Katana frommy dark side to kill any living things or immortals.
I faced Satan alone, he called up his minions and attacked me, I glady killed them and killed Satan. Now, I am the ruler of Hell and Heaven, I reincarnated God, and now he worships me. I shall be the next God of All!!
- by XxGods AssasinXx |
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- | Submitted on 10/28/2008 |
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- Title: Angel
- Artist: XxGods AssasinXx
- Description: Not much description, but on well!!
- Date: 10/28/2008
- Tags: angel
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Comments (3 Comments)
- lost in my frozen dreams - 03/28/2010
- no offence but it makes no sense
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- linduhh goes rawr - 03/08/2009
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Whoa...dude...Blasfemy...
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- Gypsy_Azura - 11/15/2008
- Okay.. with fiction you can do anything but you kinda just mixed two religions so unless you're wanting creativity over accuracy you should do some research before you write. There are a ton a grammatical errors. read read it and possibley have a teacher or parent or a friend help you correct that. If you fix all the gramatical errors it would'nt be half bad but the bad grammer really distracts from the piece.
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