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Intro
The trees are swaying in the wind, flower petals brushing past the lush grass, and sand skating over lush hills from the shores and beaches...
That is what it used to be...
Ever since then, trees never sway, flowers never bloom , the lush grass is gone, and there is no gentle sand only jagged rocks...
People aren't safe on the Earth anymore... a new power has been found. They call it magic, but thats just the code name...
My name is Sara Conseeke, and I was born during this time... I lived in a world where people fought because of greed in their hearts... Where people died not for the sake of anyone else but only for themselves... I grew up beleiving that as the only truth of the world... But that truth was changed for me... And many others...
Magic was a powerful force that was never supposed to be used, but now the universe will have to suffer with the pain of war... And destruction....
October 7th , 3020
- Title: "Majikku" Intro
- Artist: Aooki
- Description: This the intro of a story I am writing, I plan to be done sometime someday... But right now I am just having fun with it...
- Date: 07/23/2008
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- crazy damn irishman - 07/02/2009
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You really shouldn't do the "..." that is only for when you're giving short ideas and CHAT. When you write you can convey more meaning by using more descriptive words than by over emphasising. A well placed Colon or semi-colon would be better if you want to string to sets of ideas together.
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- Kekui - 07/23/2008
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um...
short. very short. i like it, although all of the "..."s were sorta annoying. - Report As Spam
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