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Chapter 1
One dark and stormy night I was watching the waves crash against the wharf making the old supports shake and our old house squealed as the storm crashed on. i slowly got up from bed trying not to disturb the floor and have it make such and awful noise that this old house makes with every step on the creaky floor boards that we have been living in for as long as i could remember. I slowly walked down the old moaning stairs. As i got down the stairs i could see someone was there and had left the light on. i went to see who it was, but there was no one was there. i looked all over and i could not find anyone, i went over to the basement were our dog was and went into the old house and found my dog laying in a puddle if blood with a flower beside it with a note attached that read: i love you so i just want to be together, you and no one else.i picked up the flower and ran upstairs to my parents bedroom, every stair seeming to stretch as i went up. finialy i got up there and i could see the blood pool just creeping underneath the door i opened it; on the bed were my parents dead with blood all over them and another flower on top of them and all over the walls written in blood was: i love you, i want to be with you, and no one can stop me.
Chapter 2
I ran upstairs in a panic and laid in bed and tried to go to sleep, maybe this was all a dream; yea that was it when i woke up it would be all over. i slowly drifted back to sleep.
I woke up in a shock
"whoa that was a bad dream" i said to my self yawning as i got out of bed and walked to the door, sitting on my window sill was the most beautiful man, about my age dark brown hair, eyes as blue as the ocean. He rose of his seat and hugged me, his hand were bloody; then i knew he was the one who killed my family, i let out a shriek in terror as he smiled and said in a deep voice as smooth as silk
" I know what i did frightened you i'm sorry i just want to be with you, no matter what."
beside us was a suitcase with one of my shirts hanging out of it.
" IM NOT GOING" i screamed in horror as he picked me up grabbed my suitcase and jumped out the window. with a graceful thud we landed. he continued and carried me to his car where he put tape over my mouth so i couldn't scream and put me in His car on the soft seats that were a gray and black , the tinted windows prevented anyone from seeing me so i had no chance of escaping. he started his car and drove off with me stuck in his car and me wanting to forget all of this.
Chapter 3
"Wake up" he says in a soft voice "your in your new home."
i stood there not saying a word to scared to move, to scared to speak; i must get out of here i thought hes going to kill me to, hes possessed . i turned around a ran as fast as i possible could but he was faster, he caught me just before i could open the door, grabbed my wrist and threw me over his shoulder.
"Your going to be my bride" he said with a smile; Tears ran down my face is horror as he climbed the stairs. The tapestry on the walls was amazing, yet they had a sad feeling to them almost as if they had feelings. "You like the paintings? yea there nice i guess."
"There very pretty"i commented in a shaky voice. At the top of the stairs i could see three rooms one he seemed to be going in the farthest from the stairs he opened the door and a beautiful bed with long lace hanging down above it.
"This is our room" he said happily; then he carried me to a room that was barley painted.
"this is our childes room" he said in a satisfied tone.
Chapter 4
"You must be tired here ill take you to bed" he picked me up and carried me to the fancy bed with all the lace and gently put me in the bed and sang me a lullaby.
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Flash backs were happening i remember back when i was a little girl he was the one who i said i would marry and i could never let go playing in the field and him having to leave promising me he would return to...marry me.
"Wake up, don't make this difficult" he said in a grunt trying to awake me.
"what?" i said kinda confused "wait now i remember when we were little you were the one who said you would marry me, you would mine forever." i hugged him as tight as i could
" Yes, and i also need air."
"sorry"
"so will you marry me?"
" i will" I got up and paused " wait did you say you child's room yesterday?"
He got up and puts his arms on my waist yes i did, but i didn't mean that, it doesn't matter
we have eternity"
"what do you mean eternity?"
"oh nothing" he just smiled and walked out of the room.
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Chapter 5
The sun was blinding as i got up. The breeze through the open window was nice. open window? i thought i ran as fast as i could to he window. it was about 50 ft of the ground. Should i jump? Yes. i put on foot on the windowsill and jumped. the air around me went so fast i couldn't believe that this was all happening; when i hit the ground i could hear him crying screaming my name, I'm sorry i thought, i no i said i would but i cant go through with it. as everything around me darkened and my pain slowly going away.
The End
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- Title: Blood Roses
- Artist: ii_Brooke
- Description: this is a story... MY STORY .... plz read
- Date: 06/23/2009
- Tags: blood roses romantic
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Comments (7 Comments)
- rythabrat - 07/02/2009
- that was awesome you shoud make more chapters saying she tried to figure it out ,but thats just my opinion you really should make more parts :O biggrin :X razz
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- RavenMasen15 - 06/25/2009
- you should write another chapter...5/5
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- Dolly Akezai - 06/25/2009
- o_o creepy..even for me,but it good! 5/5
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- ii_Brooke - 06/24/2009
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haha you all are awesome but i need donators im going to ask the gaia site pplz to make my story into a book!!
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- Kika93 - 06/24/2009
- wat the freak... child...oh no he gonna rape her >.< haha
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- royaldarkness757 - 06/24/2009
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Wait, their CHILDS room? ...
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- royaldarkness757 - 06/24/2009
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Wait, their CHILDS room? ...
I like it! XP - Report As Spam