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This is the third chapter of Death is no joke. Follow the links:
Death is no joke: http://gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100410509
Death is no joke-Part 2: http://gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100411039
I could feel my body jolt back to life. I opened my eyes. I was in a hospital, laying down on a couch in the waiting room. I quickly got up, and buried my face in my hands. Why? Why was I here? What the heck was going on?
Then I remember. Last night, the murder. My parents were dead. Dead as a doornob, however dead a doornob might be.
"You're up," a voice above me said.
"Y-yeah, I suppose I am..." I replied, instantly lifting my head. It was a nurse. Pretty, I guess, but I suppose all nurses are somewhat pretty. She was holding a clipboard, and tapping it with her pencil, a nervous habbit, I supposed. She smiled at me.
"What of my parents?" I said abruptly, getting straight to the point. The nurse frowned for a second, then quickly regained her composure.
"Would you like a drink?" she asked, just as abruptly trying to change the subject. "Apple juice?" I shook my head.
"Are they dead?" I persisted. She put down her clipboard, and sat next to me.
She folded her hands, and put them to her forehead. I could see a tear rolling down her cheek, as she looked at me and told me,
"I'm so sorry...Your father is dead. And your mother has a severe coma." I was out. I didn't know what to say, I didn't know how to react. Not that I really doubted that they were dead. Just that...having it comfirmed and said to my face was horrible. I got up, and rushed to the bathroom.
I locked myself in the stall. I kicked at the wall, snarling and growling, tears pouring down my cheeks. I looked up at the ceiling, and started shouting,
"Is that how you wanna play?! YOU WANNA PLAY THAT WAY?!?! Fine! I'll..." Tears replaced my anger, and I said quietly,
"I'm sorry, God. I'm so...sorry." I tried to look at things in a positive way. Well, my mother wasn't dead. Officially, that is. She was in a coma. Although it's hard to think of someone being in a concussion a "relief".
It is so cliche for one to say in a story "it felt like it was a dream. It wasn't real". But that's how it honestly felt. You will never understand this sort of feeling until you're going through it.
I sat on the tiolet for another two hours. Thoughtless, speechless. This wasn't a dream. It was a nightmare.
- by BeaniesFTW |
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- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Death is no joke-Part 3
- Artist: BeaniesFTW
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Yes, I'm a Christian. So, don't tell me it's politically incorrect to put God in my story. I'M CHRISTIAN, SO I HAVE A RIGHT TO DO SO!
Anyway, I hope you are enjoying my story so far. If not, well, it's only going ot get better from here. Remember, there's a lot of questions yet unanswered in the story. How does Jimmy's (the protaganist is Jimmy, btw) father know this bum? And...ok, there's not A LOT of questions unanswered, but...
ANYWAY. Please rate and comment. No fowl language. - Date: 11/26/2008
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