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heart I was on my way to class when came across a note book that had a
thirteen on it. Inside a boys name was written, Jake withers. I saw his dorm
number thirteen on it and started to head there. As I was walking to his dorm
people stared at me I wondered what it was but dicided it was nothing. When
I got there I knocked on his door 13 times he opened the door. He was
gorgeous. "Hi, I found your note book by the fountain --- I need to ask you
something." He had inturrupted "okay?" He asked " Would you like to go out
tonight ?" he asked again "Sure, see you later!" I exclaimed.
"See ya roungd 8?" I asked "Sure see ya" He turned around and shut the
door all I heard from him that night was "YES!!!"
One year later.
I was stopped outside of jake's dorm, the familair sound of the tv wasn't
there. I knocked on the door twelve times, the thirteenth time the door
slowly creeped open. I looked on the floor, there was jake with bloody
tears streaked across his face. "No!" I shriek. I call 911 and they say
the paramedics are on the way. By then i'm crying I look on the white carpet,
little red droplets were comming off my face then it occurred to me that I was
crying blood!!!!!!! The next thing i know i'm falling into darkness no I whisper.
By the time the paramedics got there bella and jake were dead. They were
pronounced dead on febuary 13th.
They were brought together by a note book but torn apart by death. I geuss
it was just forbidden love.
- by xx-magentalvr-14-xx |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/14/2008 |
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- Title: forbidden love
- Artist: xx-magentalvr-14-xx
- Description: this is my own writing. i'm sorry about the artwork dilema so i'm doing this
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: forbidden love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- trichodezia - 04/02/2010
- In a way it's creepy...
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- StrikeFreedomX10 - 04/02/2010
- damn thats...total wierdness
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- mark7595 - 07/28/2009
- nice but needs improvement
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- CarmzCookie - 09/16/2008
- Cool story, why dont you becomean author?
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- trichodezia - 09/16/2008
- Oh my god thats such a good story!
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- xx-magentalvr-14-xx - 09/16/2008
- sorry i fixed it and it looks alot better!!!
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- Gaya has a n00b - 09/14/2008
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your grammer was terrible (no offense)
sometimes you'd mess up, and put an I for it, and the entire sentence wouldn't make sense. - Report As Spam