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screaming in silence
crying in mute
wailing but no one hears
shouting but no one cares
hurting but no one knows
bleeding but no one sees
hiding but no one looks
dying but no one realises
living but i'm not sure why
falling but no one thinks to help me up
flying but no one thinks to fly with me
death is knocking at my door but no one tells it stop
life is leaving me second by second but no one tells it come
friendless but no one offers
many enemies but no one resigns
loving but no one loves back
hated but ... why?
angry but no one thinks to ask why
sad but no one thinks so cheer me up
speaking but no one's listening
screaming in silence
crying in mute
By : someone you know
Moral : think, see, look, listen...
- by blessthefate483 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- katiesaine - 05/27/2010
- i like it it expresses how i feel sometimes.
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- LadyKittenWIthClaws - 05/20/2010
- impressive! i give it a four out of five, but only becasue it feel a little too repetitious in how you word your lines... excellent other than that smile
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- black_gensou05 - 07/08/2009
- weird poem dude its so i dont know
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- samsaysftp - 05/10/2009
- I love this because it so describes most of my life
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- xiao_gong_zhu15 - 05/05/2009
- I think this is very good, but idk what it has to do with a holiday... but 4/5
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- BunBunluv123 - 02/24/2009
- interesting..... biggrin
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- rookyman22 - 02/19/2009
- I think it's kinda of dramatic and a little bit of exaggearating
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