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Hi! xd
Snowy Day, blaugh
A wonderful life, heart
Wonders in my dreams, redface
And a Merry, Merry, Christams! wink
Have a wonderful day, whee
I love you, mrgreen
Cool Snow, exclaim
Bye! smile
- by AnimeCosplayz |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Merry Christmas!
- Artist: AnimeCosplayz
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Description:
(w means words.)
It goes by:
1w
2w
3w
4w
5w
4w
3w
2w
1w - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: merry christmas
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Vexed_Shadow - 01/03/2010
- So i vote 4/5
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- Vexed_Shadow - 01/03/2010
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sorry i really like poetry so im a bit of a critic. So don't take this badly. At the beginning instead of putting Hi! you should have put Hello! and at the end instead of putting Bye you should have said Goodbye. This is how i would have wrote that.
Hello!
Snowy Day,
A wonderful life
I would defiently say
And a Merry, Merry Christmas
To you I say
I love you
cool snow
goodbye
K thats all i had to say biggrin don't think im being mean. - Report As Spam
- FAGGI0T - 02/14/2009
- i like it
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- aleki12 - 02/08/2009
- cool
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- Tarascosaurus- - 12/28/2008
- teehee <3
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- donghaerts - 12/21/2008
- neat
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