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He stares up
The ceiling fan
It's blades turn moderately slow
Like a pinwheel on a
Slow sunny day
He paints a picture
But only in his head
It shows every thing he,
Wants,
Needs,
Has,
Had,
Got,
Gave,
Hoped for
It is a beautiful
Painting
Covered in undiscovered
Colors
Every undiscovered color
And no other
Every undiscovered
Brush stroke
Every undiscovered kind,
Type
Of paint
And she is beautiful
She is there
On the painting
Sitting right next to him
Staring right at him
She kissed his cheek
His cheek responds
It turns a soft,
Delicate
Rose
He turns
In response
To the touch of her lips
He reaches out
She reaches out
Hands touch
Fingers lock
Palms melt
And blend together
Forever
Eternity
- by UnConCeivAble |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Goodnight, Goodnight...
- Artist: UnConCeivAble
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Description:
This Was A Quick Poem.
I Had To Get It Out Of My Head So I Wrote Quick.
You Can Find A Few More Of These Spat Out Poems At http://girl-in-a-fishbowl.deviantart.com.
Now I Know It's Probably A Little Confusing But Let Your Mind Wonder!
Not Everything Is Suppose To Make Sense.
Comments Are Welcome!
Enjoy!!
~Kris - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: goodnight goodnight
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Comments (7 Comments)
- saiyan2k1 - 11/09/2009
- very interesting poem
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- davidl8ly - 07/03/2009
- You are beautiful spiritually and physically. The pleasure is all mine. -_^
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- gamerguy121 - 04/05/2009
- I know exactly what you mean. 5/5
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- OMG You Killed Kenny1596 - 02/21/2009
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beautiful! everything you enter is great!
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- x-DopeSwaqqa - 01/31/2009
- Wow I agreed to what other GAIAN says about your poem...It's sweet and very nice and I understood it very clearly......It really means something......And it worth it......Amazing....I want to here from you more.....
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- ILoveSupermac18 - 01/28/2009
- I loved it! 5/5 stars
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- Thorn Of The Sky - 12/31/2008
- It was amazing!So sweet and very clear what you wanted to say!I get annoyed at myself I come here to check how my poem is doing and end up reading a ton!!lol good job.5/5
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