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Christmas has come again,
And not one thing have I gotten,
yet all of the others,
get just what they wanted.
They bully others,
that includes me,
but don't care for presents,
made so happily.
Not one present I got,
not a single one,
yet I feel good,
even if it's not a lot.
But one thing I wanted,
I knew I'd never get,
the good feeling of my parents,
whom I have never met.
I am still very happy,
with no one to share,
but I don't know anyone,
who'd even care.
I'd do anything for one,
one christmas with my parents,
not with a foster home,
who knows nothing of my ailment.
So it's one more christmas,
before I'm thirteen,
and I spend it dying,
without even being seen...
- by 109 Sk8t3r |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Not of Glee
- Artist: 109 Sk8t3r
- Description: How would X-Mas feel if it wasn't as happy or as joyful as everyone lets on?
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas glee horrible miserable disappointed
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Comments (3 Comments)
- thomlina - 11/13/2009
- i think you did a great job. i can feel the emotion
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- Ginjar420 - 10/17/2009
- Well, you have a few capitilization errors, and you lack imagery. It's rather hard to do end rhyme, but it's pretty well done. Add imagery! Add emotion! Show me don't tell me!
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- queen karenrose - 12/12/2008
- hmmmmmmmmmm ok
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