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Ah, winter.
It's beautiful, no?
I love the white softness
That looks like a pillow.
Until,
It smacks my face,
Chilling me to the core,
To which I shout,
"I declare war!"
I hear my friends laugh,
As they accept my decree,
I run to my side
To prepare my artillery.
I have an army of five.
They have ten.
Ah, but they don't know
My secret weapon.
My weapon is Charlie,
He has a talent, you see.
He can create a ball.
inside it is icy.
Snow is flying
Left and right.
I can see we are losing
This honorable fight.
As I peek over our wall
I see their fort is taller!
They have built up,
While ours is much smaller.
I know what I must do
To conquer all.
I must go over there,
And make them fall.
I'll take one for the team,
For if we lose,
They will laugh,
And we will bruise.
Taking a breath,
I jump from our fort.
Screaming and shouting,
I crumble their support.
They are mad now.
That is for sure.
They all take a shot,
And then I endure.
A wet splash of cold
That runs down my shirt.
I fall to the ground,
Defeated in my effort.
The war is over.
Their side has won.
I am forced to admit
That my side is done.
- by lildarkangel3001 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Snowball Fight
- Artist: lildarkangel3001
- Description: This poem is a little something I made in the spirits of the holidays! Don't forget some hot chocolate!
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: snowball fight
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Comments (5 Comments)
- mizuno111 - 02/26/2011
- cool.......>_<
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- Lil Ashalind - 03/03/2009
- yeah wow! i like i a lot! the way you rhyme is pretty good, it doesnt seem overdone like other poems do. Good work with the story line, and in the action of the poem smile
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- dawningbeauty - 01/04/2009
- that was really cute
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- Xx_GuMi_BeAr_SRK_xX - 12/21/2008
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This is great! biggrin
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- Grandloves - 12/18/2008
- This is the cutest and funniest poem I've read as of late- and I read a lot! Kudos and I hope you win!
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