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Snow's fallin'.
Wind's blowin'.
Yeah, it's that holiday time of year.
Families togather.
Holiday dinner.
Oh the joy is here.
The night is over.
All is quiet.
It seems done and gone.
There's still that one thing.
This man we all know.
He makes your christmas bright.
Early morning.
Tree is glowing.
Presents underneath.
You know he's been and.
There's cookies missing.
Merry Christmas once again.
- by trinitybloodlove |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: A Free Verse Holiday
- Artist: trinitybloodlove
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Description:
A seasonal poem in free verse format.
This is my first writing entry so I guess critism is welcome just don't be a jerk, that's uncalled for. - Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: free verse holiday
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ritsami - 08/18/2009
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Nice, nice, good job.
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- Gregory Gibbens - 04/02/2009
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Nice free verse!
Pros: Creativity, Color Design, Flow.
Cons: Spelling.
4/5 Over-All. - Report As Spam
- Artoro - 03/18/2009
- well... creativity is good, some spelling errors, no ryming, so i guess its between a 2 and a 3
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- minion of rock - 12/22/2008
- i thought it was ok ill give 4/5 stars
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