Continuing from yesterday's shenanigans, we now present a few more chapter outlines of the old-ish story idea, Hells Recruit! Once again, I emplore those that are offended by the thought of religious undertones and the Devil in it's various shapes, forms and names, please stop reading now.
Chapter 4: Fistandantilus - Hail to the King!
In this chapter, our hero has indeed died, and unfortunatly for him has landed downstairs. He is greeted and led into the Demonic King's chambers, where he meets Fistandantilus, ruler over all of the Hell region. It is in this chapter we gain some insight into this dictator of a ruler, and his intentions with all of Hell's residents. Some banter between the two before our hero is taken on a tour of what's in store for him down here.
Chapter 5: Tour - The Seven Hells
It is in this chapter we find out the true horrors of Hell. Seven, in fact, all dedicated to a different eternal damnation. I won't describe them here, it would spoil the surprise and disgust for my readers whee Just as the tour comes to an end and our hero is given a choice, Fistandantilus is informed by a servant that his son was about to be born.
Chapter 6: Satan - A prince is born
This chapter is dedicated to the birth of Fistandantilus' son, Satan, which is, in a twisted way, a joyous occasion.
I think I'll leave it at that, and let you guys rate it. Now if I see flames in the comments, I'll know you were being a jack-off and wanted to be disgusted, completely ignoring the warning at the top of the entry.
That is all, I'll have more next time!
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