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Chapter 1 Aftermath:
Famous: I can tell my own story.
Narrator: Alright famous lets hear your story.
Famous: Ya see, I was promised a large some of cash (weeps) If I could just beat you in a duel, Haku! (Crying intensifies) please forgive me!!!! (sobs)
Haku: Who would want you to beat me?
Narrator: Famous this is a soliloquy, you don’t converse with Haku.
Haku: Sorry bro!
Famous: (Still Crying) There were two of them, plus they had a small gang, they said if I came to their school and faced you I could get 1,000 dollars.
Narrator: Alright lets get movin’ to chapter two, but before I go, here’s some extras.
Chapter 1 Bonus:
These are basically bloopers that wouldn’t make too much sense to put in the chapter.
(during Haku’s duel)
Jaden: (on phone with Haku) I heard you have been using rip-offs of my heroes…you owe me 1,000 dollars!
Famous: Berserk Gorilla, spit on his machine and make it rust!
Haku: EWW its got spit all over it!
Al: You forgot me loser…I need a star role, after all, I am Haku’s Wingman!!!
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I was thinking about uploading this story i have been working on. Its like a Spinoff of Yu-Gi-Oh. My own characters and some of my own card ideas. If you like it let me know, if you dont, well write your own story thats better and let me know.
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