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The Lies She Wrote
Lost within the deep confines of her mind, the girl wrote about her life as best she could. Despite the fact that over half of what she wrote was a total and complete lie. [no, that doesn't apply to me...]
Prolouge from a book I'm writing.
The book I'm writing now is called The Law of the Amazon and it is the first book of a 5 part series.


Prolouge

I sit in the back of the small, empty tavern. The time is 9:00 A.M. on November 30, 1100 A.D. A man comes in bringing news, I call them rumors though, that Diablo, the Lord of Terror, and his queen, Andariel, have returned to take vengence on the three heroes that destroyed the two of them, 10 years ago.

I live in a town called Tristram. In the time when great evil roams the plains, looking and waiting for innocent humans to devour so they may live longer and more sufficient from when they were first created.

The heroe's names are unknown, all that I have learned and understand is that there was a Rouge, a woman very crafted in archery, the sole part of my people. The other two were men, a warrior and a sorcerer. All three of the heroes came from this town.



ok, so what do you think? Please give me feed back on it, I never get any at all....






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[ Trishelle ]
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 02, 2004 @ 10:06pm
It's really good! Your story seems very imaginative. smile


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 08, 2004 @ 11:33pm
i'm writing a book also, and it will be done in about a year or so, will take a lot of work



DarkSyctheFan
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