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Thorns of Love (Part two and three.)

Posted by: Hetono Wed Dec 28, 2005 @ 11:59pm

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Commented on: Thu Dec 29, 2005 @ 12:29am


	full of emotion, your poems send a message and I like them, I would rate 9 reason being if i did rate 10 then it would be perfect but no is perfect now are they?? besides I couldn't compare to such good poetry as yours :smiles:

Commented on: Wed Dec 28, 2005 @ 03:41pm


	Kei-Ria_san is right no ones perfect... But I would give it a 9.9... It's really good and the detail is just magnificent. And most of the time poems usually reflects on the person who wrote it. And I would have to say ((even though it's kind of sad)) it's pretty close to being absolutely perfect. heart 3nodding Terra-chan

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Commented on: Thu Dec 29, 2005 @ 08:14pm


	9.9...I'm agreeing with what those two said.Although your poetry is beautiful it's also deep and makes me kinda sad.So yeah keep on writing. Form:Youko ^^

Commented on: Sat Dec 31, 2005 @ 12:20am


	Wow I would rate it a 10 ^ ^ I love the way you wrote about a rose...and how it's life is gone once it starts..And this poem is really really beautiful just like the other girls said..it might be sad but atleast ur in touch with it ^ ^ Yami can really do some pretty good poems congrats ^ ^ 3nodding redface ninja 4laugh mrgreen

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Commented on: Tue Jan 03, 2006 @ 06:28pm


	hmmm...its really beautiful wink ..u write like a true poet..u say what's on ur mind and show emotion heart 3nodding xd ..the rose..yes..the most beautiful flower of all..can be so deadly from the sorrows...^ ^...I love it!! biggrin smiles Jianichie...keep expressing urself..u do it in a really good and awesome way that I wish I could do..^ ~...lol...keep writing..I rate it a 10...because u express alot from urself..and I love that feeling..u have that awesome ability..never lose it..^ ~ 3nodding wink heart redface whee xd

Commented on: Sat Jan 07, 2006 @ 08:52pm


	"People must not read meh journal postings anymore. I'm glad some people still are! >.< Still...who won't people take the time to read my poetry? T~T It's not that bad, is it?"

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Commented on: Sat Jan 07, 2006 @ 09:57pm


	I love it, and I haven't been comging around since I thought you wouldn't continue this poem. I like it alot, and I give it a 9.8/10. I'm not sure why I'm giving that score, but I guess it's because, like one said, nothing has perfection, but this camed real clsoe to. ^-^ I still read it. =O Just thought you wouldn't write it again. sweatdrop

Commented on: Tue Jan 10, 2006 @ 12:00am


	Awww!! Poor rose!! gonk Anyway...I'd give you a 8.8 because if you got a 10,you'd be the king of poetry and I don't think you can handle a 9. blaugh Well....I just wanted to put a 8.8. And anyway, I would'nt really call it a failing dream since the rose did have its time to bloom or whatever,even so I don't really agree with the part where no one truly cared about it because if no one did then it would'nt have the blood stained thorns..but yeah...maybe I'll reread it or something since I don't think I really understood it. sweatdrop Btw,I just found your journal today so yeah...=P And your poems are'nt bad at all.

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Commented on: Tue Jan 10, 2006 @ 02:58am


	it....is....beautiful.....aw man now i need a hug! gonk

Commented on: Tue Jan 10, 2006 @ 07:32pm


	I absolutely adore your work, although you are so smart that you use such a range and arrangement of words that could confuse the human mind. I love this poem, and the one before it. You have a gift Jianichie, and it's surely a beautiful one. I must say, I envy you. 3nodding You're so great at this, I would love to see more! You're the best! xd This one brings a tear to my eye cry

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Commented on: Tue Jan 10, 2006 @ 11:45pm


	Hugs Angel. "There ya go." >.<

Commented on: Wed Jan 11, 2006 @ 03:37am


	" it's Beautiful Jianichie. i always love to read your poem. it's makes me think and helps me to understand how you feel some times. i do hope i can always be there for you. i know i may not be the best person at times but i'm going to try hard. i want to be able to keep you happy." smiles softly and blushes.

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Commented on: Fri Jan 13, 2006 @ 01:35am


	yay i got a hug ^^ buh bye vanishes

Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 10:55pm


	You're sick... that's awesome I heart your poety! 3nodding

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