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Show me your love...{prt 3}
"Who is this?",Jaejoong asked ,trying not to look that angry.
"This is Donghae",she said looking away,"we met at school."
"And we met when we were 5,thats not changing a thing were you met"
"He's just a friend!"
"When did I say he wasen't just a friend??"
Kumiko looked away.Tears were starting to show in her eyes.
"O'come on...dont cry"
Kumiko started running,she couldn't bare the sight of Jaejoong mad at her.
"Kumiko!",Jaejoong pleaded her to come back.He then looked at Donghae with eyes that clearly stated 'Keep away from her',then he ran after her.
Shiwon just stood there not understanding what was happening...because half the time he was trying to catch up with Donghae and Kumiko.
DONGHAE P.O.V.(point of view)&.&
'Whoa,what a glare....but I cant let go of her...not like that.That guy looked tough...but the way he talked to her..it sounded as if he really cared'...
SHIWON P.O.V
'WTF??... im confused and Donghae looks deep in thought...it might not be the best time to say something...'
BACK TO YOUR P.O.V
And thats when Sungmin came in.
"Hey guys!"he waved across the street with a cheery dispostion.(tehe I like those words too!)
"Heyy!",yelled over Shiwon.
"Hi",Donghae said not feeling like talking.
MEAN WHILE...
Jaejoong had already easily caught up with Kumiko.But it was to late.Her face was covered in tears and her eyes were red.
"Im sorry I freaked out like that",Jaejoong tryed to explain.
Kumiko just looked away,her big grey eyes looking as sad as ever.
"I just don't want to lose you to a guy like him",Jaejoong looked her in the eyes,"I dont want to ever lose you..."
Jaejoong moved in closer to her,but she still looked away.Her eyes as grey as the clouds them selves ,finally looked into Jaejoongs.
"Im sorry",she whimpered.Jajeoong wiped the tears of of her face with his hands.She could fel the warmth from his hand,touching her face.It was a new kind of happiness,that she had never expirenced before.And it felt good, to know that Jaejoong cared.
And just like in those old time love movies,it started raining.Jaejoong pulled her in close to him,and hugged her.They stayed like this in the rain for a while.Then by that time they were both soaked.Jaejoong pulled his head away from her,she did the same.And they shared the most beautiful kiss they had both ever had.
Kumiko lightly pushed away,and they held hands,and he walked her home.
DONGHAE P.O.V.
"Oh,skid and burn...",Sungmin carried on.
'I cant belive I just told him what happened... he is going to go on with this forever',you thought.
Shiwon could tell you wanted to leave and go somewhere else,but the problem was...it was still raining,so you couldn't leave.So you had to stay at the nearest shelter you could find...in a coffee house.The strong smell of coffee burnt your nose(hairs&.& wink and you were starting to fell dizzy.What had happened today was almost to much to take in,but you knew it was bound to get worse,because you had to had her.You couldn't just give up...not when it comes to her.
SUNGMIN P.O.V!!( heart )
'That poor guy...I cant beleive this...I WANTED A HUG!I saw her earlier today at the park when she was walking home.I said Hi!but all she did was look me right in the eyes.That moment,was like heaven on earth.Im happy for him..in some ways ,but...I dont exactly know how to explain...so Im not going to tell him.'you thought over it thoroughly in you head ,then gavehim some advice.
"If you truely love her,let her go...thats the best that you can do,and I bet nothing more,could make her happier.Belive me ,girls dont like to see 2 guys that she both cares for..fight.",you said.'Ok maybe I should take some of that advice ,too sweatdrop '.
NORMAL P.O.V
Shiwon looked at Sungmin,he was really sweating...he was hiding something..and he was going to try to find out.
"Can I talk to you for a minute,sungmin?",said Shiwon,"Alone".
Sungmin and Shiwon got up and walked outside,underneath a table umbrella.
"So...whats up?",Sungmin asked looking down with his hands in his pockets.
"I was going to ask you the same question"
"huh?"
"I know your hiding something!"
"What have you gone insane!!"
"Oh come on!Its all to obvious something is up!"
"Nothing is up,but your imagination"
"Is it about the story with Kumiko?"
"I dont love Kumiko!Why would you say that!!"
"I didnt"
Sungmin went in to the coffee house ,grabbed his stuff from the table and left.
'I hate when he plays mind games with me..'Sungmin thought.
Shiwon walked back into the coffee house.
"What was that all about",asked Donghae before taking a sip of hot chocolate (&.& mmm chocolate)
"It was nothing...the kid is just having a hard time thinking about some things",Shiwon explained after taking a sip of coffee,"Now lets get out of here,Im starting to get a headache."

WOOHOO! I REALLY LIKED WRITING THIS ONE!ESPECIALLY THE HOT CHOCOLATE PART! CHOCOALTE CHOCOLATE CHOCOLATE!lol I hope you enjoyed...but I NEED MORE READERS..OR i MIGHT STOP WRITING &=(
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User Comments: [3]
softballluver13
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Sat Aug 25, 2007 @ 08:56pm


I LOVE THIS FANFIC! I'M GONNA TRY AND GET MORE PEOPLE TO READ IT! I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE A BANNER FOR YOUR FANFIC! LIKE THE ONE I HAVE. IT REALLY ATTRACTS PEOPLE TO COME AND READ. BUT OTHER THAN THAT I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP! ^^


xXsuisenXx
Community Member





Sat Aug 25, 2007 @ 09:20pm


its great as ever ^^ but im confused @.@ theirs to many peeps sweatdrop lolz


Kumiko YoungWoong
Community Member





Sat Aug 25, 2007 @ 11:37pm


Thx for the comments..but I cant tell if pplz are reading it or not!lEAVE A COMMENT IF YOUR rEAD IT PLEASE!


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