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Show me your love...{prt 4}
Kumiko walked into the house and immediatly plopped on the couch,soaking wet.
"Kumiko!Get off that couch your soaking wet!",her mom yelped,"and get a towel".
"Ok mom!",she called
"And were is your backpack?"
"OMG MY BACK PACK!",she remembered,"Ill be right back mom!"
Kumiko brushed her hair and rushed outside.
And without looking were she was going,she bumped into someone again.
"Hi,sorry",she said without looking.
It was Donghae.
"I saw your backpack laying out on the street,so I thought I would bring it back for you",he explained,"and Im sorry for what happened today.Its just,were I come from,we give hugs as a sorry,but I guess you dont do that up here"
Kumiko hugged Donghae,"Sure we do*giggle*"
"You should smile more often"
"huh?"
"You look really beautiful when yu smile,promise you will smile more for me?"
"I promise",she smiled.
"Heyy Donghae!Do you wanna ,grab a bite to eat?",she asked smiling.
"Really?SURE!",he said as his hole face lit up.
"Mom!Im gunna be a bit longer!!",she yelled through the window.
They went to a little restaraunt across town,and had some fries.
'I hate to admit it'she thought while laughing'But Im actaully having a good time'.
Kumiko Finished off her dinner and they went for a little walk to the park(since his house is right there)the sky was beautiful that night there wasent a cloud in sight ,just the stars.
"Good night Donghae!",she said as she waved to him.
It was about 10:00 and she was getting tired.So she went and sat on the swings
to regain her strength.Today had been a long day.
Then she thought you saw someone behind the old oak tree 5 meters away.
Kumiko started her way around the old oak tree when she got tackled,then ticked(???)The person had attacked her ful speed ahead and was tickling her all over.And under her laughs she could hear the other persons.She could regognize that laugh anywhere.It was Jaejoong.
When he was done he asked,"What are you doin here?"
"I was out for a walk at 10",she said rolling her eyes.
Jaejoong did an O RLY? face
"OK!I was with Donghae",she said
"What??",Jajeoong said surprised.
"But it was only to have some fries!",she explained,"You know I would never betray you!I love you!"
Then out of nowhere,Jaejoong got shot in the leg.
"JAEJOONG",Kumiko screamed.
She looked around in a rush to find something to stop the bleeding.She then lifted Jaejoongs pant leg and looked at the wound.She winced a it.The flesh had been badly wounded and the bleeding wouldn't stop.The she remembered.SHe went through her purse and found aa cloth and her water.She wet the cloth,and trembling,she started cleaning the wound.Jaejoongs crys of pain filled the air.It looked like he had also sprained his ankle from the fall.Jaejoongs screams had turned into heavy breathes. She took the new white swater she got ,and wrapped it around Jaejoongs wound to stop she bleeding for a bit.But she couldn't take it.She move up ad hugged Jaejoong.Her tears were making his matching sweater wet.She could feel him breathing,and his heart beat and pulse.
"KUMIKO LOOK OUT!",Jaejoong screamed as he pushed her out of the way.
He took another bullet to the leg.
"NO!",she screamed at the top of her lungs.
She looked towards the forest,and there he was the shooter.
He must have known that she saw him,because he started to make his way over.
Jajeoong by the had fainted from blood loss,but Kumiko still held his hand,with her heart pounding.He stopped at the swings.Right there with the gun in his hand.
"Move",he said.
Kumiko swallowed and said,"No."
"I said move!",He said pretty much yelling now.
"Im not going to move!"she said sternly
Kumiko's P.O.V
I dont know what going through my head..I want to run ,but I know what Im doing is right.I am not ging to let Jaejoong die..no not like this.
"I said move girl!UNLESS YOU WANT ME TO SHOOT YOU TOO!"
"Fine!"
"You asked for it!"
The man held his gun up and ....bang.
I'd never given much thought to how I would die,thought I'd had no reason to in the last few months,but even if I had,I would not have ever imagined it like this.
I stared ,without breathing , across the park,into the eyes of the man.I lay there motionless as he watched.Surely it was a good way to die.Protecting someone I love.That should count as something.I knew that something like this would happen.Life was going to well.But,as terrified as I was,I couldn't bring myself to regret the decision.And as everything started to fade away...I heard people,a siren,and Donghae's voice.




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User Comments: [7]
Kumiko YoungWoong
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 @ 02:42am


I GIVE MOST CREDIT TO THAT LAST PARAGRAPH TO THE BOOK TWILIGHT! gonk It was the perfect ending to ths chapter!


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carly802
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 @ 02:43am


omg omg no dont let them die please not like that nooooooooooooooooooo crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying sad cry gonk


also awsome wirting blaugh

randomness comin on disregard the fowllowing:
biggrin smile redface crying stare xd 3nodding blaugh gonk scream stressed sweatdrop heart domokun xp whee wink sad surprised eek confused cool lol mad razz cry evil twisted rolleyes exclaim question idea arrow neutral mrgreen ninja 4laugh rofl pirate talk2hand burning_eyes cheese_whine dramallama wahmbulance emo there im done i just ad an urge to do that sorry razz :Big:


xXsuisenXx
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 @ 08:45pm


OMFG so much action O.O
i wonder who shot them confused
yaay the bag is back ^^


softballluver13
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 @ 10:29pm


OMFG!!! I SWEAR I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! PLEASE HURRY AND WRITE THE NEXT ONE I LOVE THIS FANFIC. POOR JAEJOONG IT'S GONNA BE OKAY I'M HERE FOR YOU. ^^ I HOPE KUMIKO IS ALRIGHT TO. I DN'T THINK IT'S DONGHAE BECAUSE HE WOULDN'T SHOT KUMIKO. I MIGHT HAVE BEEN SO ONE THAT IS JEAULOUS OF JAEJOONG! I HOPE IT WASN'T SUNGMIN. PLEASE NOT MY LITTLE SUNGMINNIE!


Kumiko YoungWoong
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Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 04:07pm


If you guys could give some suggestions on what should happen be my guest,go ahead!


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xXsuisenXx
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Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 06:18pm


coolness new banner whee


softballluver13
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Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 07:48pm


i like the banner. i see you used the site. I gonna make one too!


User Comments: [7]
 
 
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