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Show me your love...{prt.13}
Show me your love...{prt.13}
"Oh wow", Asuka said, walking off of Donghaes front steps. Asuka stumbled across a rock and almost toppled right smack dab on her face. She carfully got up and started walking to Kumikos house."I can't wait until she hears the great news!!", Asuka said to herself, now running down the street as fast as her feet could carry her.Asuka finally reached Kumikos front door and sighed."I hope she'll take this better than I imagened"
*10 minutes later*
"Wow", Kumiko looked down the ground, her eyes were slightely swelling.
"Kumiko", she said sympathetically," If your not okay with it, then I won't date him"
"I never said I wasen't okay with it", she buried her head in her couch pillow, and then several moments later, she lifted her head with a meak smile.
"No, you should go for it", she said her voice already cracking up.
"Okay, now you get some sleep", she patted Kumiko oin the leg," You look so tired"
Asuka got up and walked out,"Good night Kumiko", she said shutting the door.
When Asuka shut the door behind her, Kumiko stuffed her head in her pillow.
*KUMIKO POV*
'What the hell, why do Ifeel this way, its not like I ', she swallowed hard,'Have feelings for him, I just, don't...want Asuka to get hurt, oh crap, Im starting to sound like my brother now'
Kumiko's pillow was wet with small tears, and she grabbed her larger pillow and laid down on her bed.'Uhh, I can't let this get the best of me, I defanantly want Asuka to be happy, and D-Donghae', she suddenly winced,' But if this is what I have to do for my friends to be happy, then, hell, Ill do it, I cant let my feelings get the best of my, they are my friends, and even if its causing me pain, I will do what I can to make them...happy'
And Kumiko finally fell asleep, and she dreampt a dream with Donghae Asuka and her, they werer on a building, and Donghae was holding Asuka in his arms.
Kumiko gasped when she saw the ground below her, it was starting to crumble. She reached out for help, but her feet wouldn't move.
"Whatever makes us happy", Donghae said, with a wide grin on his face.
Then the building started to fall, as her screams went unheard, before she started falling she saw Asuka wave with a smile, Buh-bie.
Kumiko awoke the next morning with her brother at her side. His face and eyes were filled with tears .
"K-Kumiko, I have something to tell you", his voice cracked under pressure,"its about mom, she left for work last night, and-and", tears started rolling down his face,"Shes n-not coming back"
Kumiko sat up and looked at her brother, he was looking at the ground, purple circles around his eyes indacated he had been up all night crying, and she sat there , not understanding what was going on, her mind was blank, and apparently so was her face.
"SHES DEAD YOU IDIOT!!", her brother shouted.
"Oh, I see", she said getting out of her bed and walking downstairs.
Her brother looked at her like she had mental problems and ran downstairs.
"Don't you see what just happened??", he asked flailing his arms in the air.
"Yeahh, shes dead, got in a car accident, Ive got stuff to do today, love ya", and she left the house,with her brother left in a confused angry depressed state. But he didn't know what it was like, all th nightmares, all the earth clrumbling below is very feet, having feeling for a friend that used to have them back, but now is going out with your best friend. He doesn't know what its like to have tat friend be the only thing that keeps you going, he doesn't know what its like having your best friend have a heart attack and its all your fault, he doesn't know her anymore, no one does.
NORMAL POV
Kumiko walked into the coffee shoppe were she saw Shiwon sitting with Sungmin.
She sat down beside Sungmin and put her head on the table.
Sungmin could tell something was wrong and put his hand comfortably on her back.
"Dont touch me", she snarled.
"Good morning", Shiwon smiled.
"Screw off Shiwon, you have no reseon to be a pumpus idiot right now", she lifted her head, and she ordered a coffee.
"Is something wrong Kumiko?", Sungmin asked.
"No s**t shirlock", she scowled.
Sungmin took is hand off of her back and looked down into is hotchocolate.
"If you want to talk abo-"
"I don't, thanks for the offer", she dug her ead int her arms, as she eard Sungmin sigh.
"I think I'm, just gunna go now", Shiwon pointed awkardly his way out.
"I- I thinkk Im gunna go ,too.", Sungmin started to get up, when he was pulled down back to his seat.
"No, please Sungmin", she sobbed," Stay"
Sungmin sat down and coughed.
"Maybe we should go to the park?", Sungmin suggested.
"Yeah", Kumiko got up, not letting him see her face,"Lets go"
Kumiko and Sungmin raced past the speedy cars to the park, right near Donghaes house.
Kumiko took a seat on the swings, hiding her face with her hair.
"Whats wrong Kumiko ...seriously", Sungmin sat down on the sand, and looked up at her with the most caring eyes se had ever seen. Sungmin took her hand, and looked her in the eyes.
"Please tell me", he said soothingly.
Kumiko looked up, her face was red and sweaty, and her big grey eyes were swelled up with the tears that ran down her face.
"Oh Sungmin", Kumiko lunged out of the swing and tackled him with a hug.
"I- I -I ", she hyper ventalated," Im sorry!"
"Hey, there ,there", Sungmin patted her back and rubbed herback softly," Just tell me what happened"
Kumiko took a deep breath and she started telling him.
" Asuka kissed Donghae, and I don't know how, I feel about that, should I let them date or shouldn't I? See, the problem is.... I think I still have feelings, for Donghae.
And Asuka's planning to ask him out! I know that jelousy isnt a good thing, but Donghae was always there for me, and I caused his heart attack", Kumiko and Sungmin looked down at the ground for a couple of moments.
"Keep going", Sungmin looked back up.
"And, I want them both to be happy, and Asuka is like, my best friend, an I don't know what to do.", Kumiko pulled back from his arms,"and theres something else, too"
Sungmin looked in her eyes,"You know very well Kumiko, you can tell me "
Kumiko winced,"My mom died", tears started streaming down her face like crazy.
"Kumiko", Sungmin said sweetly,"Im , so sorry"
'There it is again...bad luck', Sungmin thought to himself.
"No", she said looking away,"Its not your fault, you didnt do anything"
"Kumiko", he turned her face towards hers," Youve had a bad day haven't you?"
Kumiko chuckled,"Yeah"
Kumiko had never seen this sweet comforting side of him. She never knew that should would be falling in-
"Kumiko!!", Hankyung shouted across the park.
"s**t", Kumiko looked down and got up.
"Hankyung I have to tell you something"
"Okay", he kissed her lips,"Shoot"
"My mom died, Asuka kissed Donghae, my brother probably hates me and I", she hesatated,"love Sungmin"



Hankyung looked over to Sungmin, with a dropped jaw. He didn't see that one coming...at all.
"Oh", he said looking down,"It looks like we both have bad news then"
"What?", said Kumiko looking up.
"Well, you see, I ran away from home to see you and well,... my parents have found me so, I have to go back home. So everything works out!", he raised his arms, then sighed.
Kumiko eyes started to swell.
"You can't leave", she said looking down.
"Believe me Kumiko", he lifted her chin," You'll be better off without me here. You've got great friends"
She turned her head towards the Coffee Shoppe were Asuka ,Donghae,Eeteuk Heechul ,Shiwon, Miharu and her brother were.
"And someone to take care of you", he looked at Sungmin and smiled,"I guess, it just wasen't meant to be", he picked up her hand and lightly kissed it,"Good-bye Kumiko... I love you" and he walked away, head hanging.
And as fast as he had come back into her life, he was gone.
Just like that.
Kumiko watched his every step as he walked slowly over the snow covered grass.
Little snow flakes started to slowly make their way to the ground, and she looked down.
"Im pathetic", she said to herself.
She then felt a light touch on her back.
"Lets go", he said turning her towards the Coffee Shoppe,"They'll be waiting"
"Sungmin?"
"Yes"
"Why does this happen to me?"
"I dont know but, I have an idea"
Kumiko walked closer to Sungmin as he put his arm around her shoulder.
"I hope he doesn't hate me"
"Meh, he couldn't, why would anyone hate you", he shook her shoulder and they laughed.
"I guess your right", she smiled as they crossed the road.
"Hey Asuka!", Kumiko said,"Did you do it yet?"
"Nooo", she said pouting,"Not yet, with Kangin and all, I unno what to do"
"Heyy Asuka", Donghae said as she turned around, can I talk to you", he looked at Kumiko," In private?"
Kumiko smiled and nodded.
Asuka got up and Kumiko took her seat.
ASUKA POV
"What is it Dongh-"
And before she could even finish her sentence Donghae was kissing her, again.
'His lips are so soft....and hes so...' and before she knew it she was pinned up against a wall, and kissing him back.
'Maybe I shoulkd ask him out', she said closing her eyes,' I mean he is a good kisser'
He leaned more into her.
'I mean hes a DANM good kisser'
Then it was interupted.
"DONGHAE", and Donghae was knocked off of me.
"HEYY", I said,"I WAS ENJOYING THAT!!!!!"
Just then the person who had tackled Donghae stood up and turned around.
"KANGIN!! YOU IDIOT! WAT ARE YOU DOING??", I screamed at the top of my lungs.
"Im protecting you from that monster!"
Donghae sat up and wiped the blood off of his lip.
"Thats no monster!", I screamed at him, pointing at Donghae,"Thats my BOYFRIEND!",All three of us were surprise at the word I had just said.
"Uhh, I thought we were going out", he pointed at himself.
"Yeah thats what you thought", said Donghae getting up and standing himself beside me.
"Are you okay?", I said looking up at him.
"Yeah Im fine", he said looking down with a smile upon his face.
"Kangin!",I yelled as he looked up,"Are you out of your idiototic mind, I knew you were a spaz, but not this much of one!!"
Kangin looked back down.
"He just came out of sugery!You could've killed him!", my voice started to crack.
"Then you would've went to jail!And he would be dead! And I-I'd have no one left!My moms gone my dads gone! I-", I sighed,"I dont want to lose you guys to!!"
"Oh", Kangin said looking down,"So Im a third wheel am I?"
"No kangin", I sqeeuzed my eyes at him,"Thats not what I meant!"
"Of course it is, you've got Donghae now, your fine", he said brushing himself off,"I know exactly what you meant , Im outta here"
"Kangin!", I screamed after him.
"Heyy", Donghae said,"Its okay, he'll come back"
'I hope so'
NORMAL POV
"Hey Kangin whats",Kumiko said as he walked quikly away,"wrong?"
Kumiko rolled her eyes and said,"Come on, lets go to my house, since Eeteuk and Miharu are already there"
So they walked back to Kumiko's house laughing ect.
And they were there, Kumiko unlocked the door and went inside.
"EW YOU GUYS GET A ROOM!", she hear Sungmin yell from behind her like a child,
"Technacly , this is a room", she said.
"Well, no smooching in this one", her brother said as he walked in.
"Oh my gosh", Asuka said as she sat up and pushed Eeteuk off of her and walked into the kitchen.
Eeteuk and Kumiko walked into the kitchen after her.
And Kumiko and Miharu came out instantly with a movie.
"Its a scary one", Miharu pointed at the movie.
"Its called The Cuts", Kumiko raised her left eyebrow.
(The cuts is a Korean horror movie that is totally off the hook! Its got blood and scary pop up ghost stuff!!)
"Well", said Kumiko picking up the phone,"Ima call some more of my friends and we can have a movie night"
"CALL MY GF TOO!", said her brother.
"Okay Wonbin" (lol her brothers identity is finally revealed!!!)
Pairing on the couch...
Kumiko-Sungmin
Asuka-Donghae
Miharu-Eeteuk
Coco-Ryeowook
Karii-Shiwon
Yoona-Heechul
Sooyoung-Wonbin
~````````*``````````~
Middle of movie..
"GASP", they all gasped as they grappled onto the people that was beside them.
Sungmin put his arm round Kumiko tightly and put his head on hers. Kumiko looked over to Donghae and Asuka, they had fallen asleep.
Kumiko smiled as she nestled into Sungmins chest and sighed.
'He smells good', she said to herself.
She looked over at Miharu and Eeteuk, even though there waen't much watching involved , tey looked happy, until a pillow was thrown at the from Heechul ,Sooyoung ,Wonbin, and Yoonas area.
She shifted her eyes to them, the girls were in the middle of the couch hiding behind pillows, while Heechul and Wonbin were too.
Kumiko smiled to herself and closed her eyes, and in some time falling asleep before Sungmin took a deep breath and kissed the top of her head.
KUMIKOS DREAM
It was in the park the same night that her and Jaejoong had gotten shot, Jaejoong had just fainted and the shooter was coming into veiw. "Oh crap" she said.
But this time it was different, there was no mask, she could see the face perfectly.
"You idiot", Shiwon said,"Your so dumb"
Kumikos eyes widend and as he took out a gun, and shot her, in three places, the leg the lung and the head.






User Comments: [4]
Colorful_Strawberries
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Fri Dec 14, 2007 @ 10:21pm


YAY love it!


Kumiko YoungWoong
Community Member





Fri Dec 14, 2007 @ 10:26pm


Nobody adding comment, then I will!! gonk


softballluver13
Community Member





Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 05:22am


OMG I FLIPED OUT WHEN YOU SAID YOU WROTE ANOTHER CHAP! DONGHAE AND I AND KANGIN. I LOVE THE DRAMA BETWEEN US. I BET YOU KANGIN IS GONNA TRY AND WIN ASUKA'S HEART OVER! OMG I JUST WANTED TO TELL YOU I LOVED THAT PART! OMG OMG OMG OMGOGMOGOMGOMGOMGMGMOGMOGMOMOGMOGMOMGOMOGMOGMOMGOMOGMOGMOGOMGOMOMGOMGOMGOMGMMGMGOMOGMOMGOMGOMGOMOMGOMGOMGOMGOMOGMOMGOMGOMGOMG! SORRY JUST GOING CRAZY! I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE HAD A DREAM OF SHIWON SHOTING HER AND JAEJOONG. I WONDER IF HE REALLY DID IT. OH AND BTW KUMIKO I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS. I NOTICED YOU USED SAME OF THE PARTS THAT I USED IN MY STORY. THAT'S OKAY THOUGHT BECAUSE I LOVE IT BETTER WHEN YOU USE IT! LOVE YAH AND THE STORY KEEP WRITING!


carly802
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Sun Dec 16, 2007 @ 03:42am


omg that is soooooooooooo awesome i can not wait to see you next and hug you!!!!! god! i cant wait for the next chap!!!!! woot you know i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! heart blaugh 4laugh whee woot!!!!!!!!


(ps.. again if anyone doesnt know i am miharu!!)


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