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Show me your love...{prt 2}
As she was walking home ,she felt as though someone was following her.So she walked faster.but then the foot steps behind her got faster.She started into a light jog...then a run.The person was still right on her trail.She slowed down right when she thought she had lost him when a hand grabbed her shoulder and turned her around.
"Jaejoong!You scared the living s**t out of me!",she said, happy it wasen't some creeper stalker (I love that word...stalker &.& wink .Jaejoong held her waist close to him ,and gently..he kissed her lips.
"Lets go",he said,"before anyone sees us".
Her relationship was going well with Jaejoong,but no-one wanted it to....Jaejoong was one of those poplular guys that every girl wanted..he kinda reminded you of Heechul...but more romantic.So he couldn't just go off and tell everyone about their relationship,or she would be dead for sure(aww I wanted to say fo sho &.& wink
The only thing they could do in public was hold hands,because thats what friends do,and that was thier excuse.
"What shall we do tonight",he pondered,"oh!I know ...come ,I have something to show you".
Jaejoong took her hand again and started running.It was around 10 at night and a full moon..not many people were out and about.
They finally came to a small meadow where he still held her hand,leading her through the tall grass.
They then came to a forest where they started walking down the path.
It was beautiful.The trees hung over top of you but still leading a line through the night sky ..so they could still see the stars over top.Then they came to a clearing with a big pond.It was so quite that she could hear the crickets chirping,and Jaejoong coming up behind her.
"Its...beautiful,and so worth it.",she said ,as Jaejoong held her from the back,and as she looked around and at the clear night sky.
"Its almost as beautiful as you",he whispered in her ear.She put a light smile on her face as they stood there motionless,looking at the lake.
They sat down after a while and just admired the lake ,grass and sky.The sky and the lake were beautiful that night.The stars looked like they had fallen from the sky and sparkled on the lake. The moon was full,so it created a beautiful feeling,inside of her.Like the feeling she got when she first saw Jaejoong.
Before she fell asleep the last thing she heard was,I love you.
~~~~~~next morning~~~~~~
She felt as though she had accoplished some thing.'WTF?why am I home?',she thought,'Jaejoong must have brought me home,what a sweetie ^.^'.He had walked al that way.'Maybe it as a dream'.You got off of the couch and got some cereal."OMFG SCHOOL!"she screamed.
She went upstarirs got dressed ,brushed her hair and teeth all in 5 mins.
She grabbed an apple and went out the door."Bie mom,Bie bro!",she yelled out the door.
Her brother did a o rly? face ,then looked at mom.
"She'll notice dont worry",said mom.
She got out the door and the instant she got off of the steps she bumped into someone.Two people acctually.
"Donghae??",Kumiko questioned,"and ,uh,person"
"Oh..this is Shiwon..and you didnt return my call your mom said you were out",Donghae said sadly.'So it wasen't a dream',she thought.
"Im sorry Donghae",she apologized,"and Hi Shiwon its nice to meet you".
She shook his hand ,but it didnt have the same affect as it did with Donghae.
As they started walking down your street Dongahe noticed your backpack.
"Uh,why do yu have your backpack?",he said ,looking confused.
"We are going to school...aren't we?".
Donghae and Shiwon almost broke out in tears when you asked.
"Sorry ...but*giggle* its saterday",said Shiwon,all red in the face.
Her cheecks turned bright red ,the she ran home.
"Oops",said Shiwon.
"Thanks alot man,you made her leave!",said Donghae ,while he punched Shiwon.
Donghae started running after you ,Shiwon followed.
She was still quite away from her house.Donghae caught up fast and turned her around.
Bofore she knew it Donghae's arms were around her.
"Im sorry for laughing at you like that",Donghae whispered.
He let go of her and you guys started walking off,when somone screamed,
"KUMIKO!".

~~~WHO SCREAMED HER NAME ...WHATS UP WITH DONGHAE...AND ARENT YOU JUST HATING HER RIGHT NOW....EVEN IM ENVIOUS AND I AM WRITING IT!!!
tell me if you want me to keep writing...THANKIES FOR THE TIPS SOFTBALLLOVER13
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.thas Shiwon
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. mmmm thas Jaejoong =3
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User Comments: [3]
Kumiko YoungWoong
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Fri Aug 24, 2007 @ 02:12am


I wrote it and even I thought it was pretty damn good xD


xXsuisenXx
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Fri Aug 24, 2007 @ 12:17pm


lolz yea it is good whee


softballluver13
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Fri Aug 24, 2007 @ 09:42pm


i am so itching to read the next chap! I bet you it was Jaejoong that screamed her name. he must have seen donghae's arms around her. I thought it was funny when Kumiko came out the house ready for school. I JUST SO LOVE THIS FANFIC! YOUR DOIN AN AWESOME JOB KEEP WRITTING. I WANT THE NEXT CHAP! ^^ LOL! YOUR WELCOME FOR THE TIPS!


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