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Little bitten fruit
Hiding in my subconscious
You ate nectarines
- by Red Dye Number Three |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/26/2012 |
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- Title: untitled haiku
- Artist: Red Dye Number Three
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Description:
I had a really shitty nightmare about an ex that I wasn't fully over, and so I spat this out when I woke up. I don't normally put my feelings into poetic form, but the words kept dancing behind my eyes, and the only way I could rid myself of the anxiety was to produce this.
I know that it won't hold any meaning to you, but I chose my words very carefully, even if they appear plain.
I hate him now. This is my closure. - Date: 08/26/2012
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Red Dye Number Three - 08/29/2012
- Hah. I don't think so, friend. A valiant effort, though, and beautifully worded. You've got chops.
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- Illso - 08/29/2012
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Hidden nectar
Savored
For later... - Report As Spam
- Red Dye Number Three - 08/28/2012
- Thank you.
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- Ikuo Jinichi - 08/28/2012
- I can taste the art, added along with the image and the description, well played.
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