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His face fades in the sands of time
lost to my heart yet not my mind
he walks among all my pain
- by theravensclaw |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/28/2011 |
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- Artist: theravensclaw
- Description: just something that popped in my head.....i wish i knew how to end it tell me what you think
- Date: 06/28/2011
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- silverslipstream - 07/08/2011
- i like it, hmm, maybe some thing about a line?
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- theravensclaw - 06/28/2011
- oh what do you think i should of said lol ?
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- whytey - 06/28/2011
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If you had made the last line rhyme it would've been very nice.
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